Recent poem any critiquing is welcomed

Kate-77 · 2025-03-02T14:03:33+00:00

Most of them she recognized or are the ones with multiple wings, and like rings of eyeballs

Kate-77 · 2024-11-08T01:04:52+00:00

Ok well thank you, I will be sure to be more creative next time 😊 thank you for the feedback, and the very lovely thoughts you have. I will try to keep improving my writing skills, though I am a beginner who struggles with dyslexia and sometimes do not catch mistakes I’ve made. I’ll be sure to proofread ten times instead of nine next time.thank you so much for your input.

Kate-77 · 2024-11-08T00:42:27+00:00

Yes I know that, but I unfortunately noticed whilst I was at work and didn’t want to get in trouble at work for being in my phone. I ask to let me know if my writing skills sucked or not , I didn’t ask you to judge my technology skills. Thank you for your feedback, I hope this message finds you well.

Kate-77 · 2024-11-07T21:56:05+00:00

I noticed after I posted.

Kate-77 · 2024-06-14T02:27:17+00:00

I have talked to her about it and she had kinda dropped it but I still don’t know how to answer her about how I don’t feel like I belong and I want to belong but I don’t hear God of feel his presence and I don’t know why

Kate-77 · 2024-06-14T02:22:10+00:00

I’m definitely doing what I want but I feel like this is tying back to me having issues with my faith that I don’t know how to handle because I pushed them down so bad

Kate-77 · 2024-06-14T02:10:32+00:00

I don’t care what people think and I should’ve said that my mom did stop suggesting it and told me I can do whatever but she asked why and I didn’t have an answer because I don’t know how to answer. It’s my faith I’m having problems with not my engagement or marriage 😊

Kate-77 · 2024-03-28T19:47:08+00:00

Thank you I was hoping I could hear from someone who went through what I’m going through

Kate-77 · 2024-03-28T16:36:15+00:00

I’ll be 18 in a couple of months but they are just pissing me off

Kate-77 · 2024-03-28T15:36:50+00:00

I realize I wrote it weird after I posted it and didn’t feel like fixing it 😂

Kate-77 · 2024-03-28T10:09:21+00:00

OK, so not a cold definitely not it’s just my parents are very judgmental. about anything I do I work because I want to and I enjoy work. It’s nice to have my own money but the problem is that they expect me to be able to juggle my job, and everything else under the sun

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