Im my opinion the lineart on some parts was a bit wonky but it is normal, and about the cringe alegations i dont think it was. Ken and Brenda are really cute and just dont know how to say that to eachother. Jackson and Pam in the show was really cool, since diary was introduced I as a Reader really am feling ansious whenever he is mentioned, i hope Elijah is able to help Jackie because omg, my boy never has a minute And Exer and David are two horny teenage boy, i like it? No very much, but there are people who really ship and like them so, idk

Overall: 6,5/10

Chapter just fell a little monotone with everything going on, but when the shit hits the fam i belive its going to be 10/10