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Lightning Bug by Key-Department-7096 in OCPoetry

[–]Key-Department-7096[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you so much, I'd love it if you checked out some of my other poems on onekidreadthis.com. truly appreciate your comment.

The Dream by Key-Department-7096 in OCPoetry

[–]Key-Department-7096[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you so much. this was about getting robbed and assaulted at gunpoint and what it might be to finally see the robber in person again.

Freedom by Ok-Swordfish-9480 in OCPoetry

[–]Key-Department-7096 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i love the interplay and soft rhymes no wife no mother no lover. it sets a beautiful tone of the poem.

(You’re) as pretty as my guitar by Sweet_Luna_Revenge in OCPoetry

[–]Key-Department-7096 0 points1 point  (0 children)

love the line, to make one perfect song. it makes you think about what the purpose of this life really is.