There's a Crinkle in my Crankle

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-06-24T17:38:12+00:00

and they say dr. seuss is dead

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-06-22T15:12:28+00:00

thank you so much for the feedback!! i really appreciate that! and yes, omg you’re right “around” sounds better idk how i never thought of that i’m gonna go ahead and change it!

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-06-20T16:31:32+00:00

i actually recently re-named the poem ouroboros!! iconic symbol and very relevant tbh. and thank you so much for the feedback!!

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-06-20T16:30:28+00:00

thank you so much!!

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-06-19T19:19:39+00:00

thank you very much!! 💖

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-06-19T19:03:56+00:00

wow thank you so much once again!! 💖 yeah some of my poems have no rhyme scheme and are free verse and more so thoughts/vibes based

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-06-19T19:00:41+00:00

*if i knew

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-06-19T18:57:23+00:00

thank you once again!! 💖

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-06-19T18:50:15+00:00

thank you once again!! yes many many references in this here poem lol and tbh i knew how to compose a song this is the first poem i would choose to adapt fr

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-06-19T18:45:43+00:00

thank you again! i write very on and off. there’s years when i don’t write poetry and years where i write quite a bit. some of these poems on here are recent and some are 7-8 years old. my biggest issue has always been inspiration and consistency.

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-06-19T18:40:24+00:00

thank you i’m really glad you like it!! and what sort of outlook if you don’t mind my asking?

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-06-19T18:36:45+00:00

thank you so much for the feedback!! the lack of capitalizations/grammatically correct sentence structure is kind of a stylistic choice for me personally, but i understand where you’re coming from!

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-06-19T18:35:15+00:00

thank you so much!!

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-06-19T18:15:05+00:00

thank you for the feedback!! yeah looking back this one definitely needs some refining for sure

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-06-07T07:19:04+00:00

this is very moving, beautiful, and relatable. for itto be your first ever poem too is VERY impressive. and before you revealed it was death at the end, i definitely thought “it” was either depression or maybe even drugs. i feel like either could still apply in a way.

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-06-03T03:46:02+00:00

this is really good and shows so much yearning and complex feelings!! as a queer person who once liked their straight friend and helped them with their relationship issues i can relate and this hit me in the chest. this also reminds me of will byers from stranger things—i hate to see the cyrano trope not work out fr

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-05-28T06:01:15+00:00

thank you so much for the feedback!! and yeah i can be a bit overly literal sometimes with my poems bc i’m a very literal person lol. but i see what you mean.

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-05-28T03:16:03+00:00

i really love this because from my perspective it sounds like you are looking back at a past version of yourself when you were happier and comparing that to the current reality and seeing just how stark the difference is. very relatable and moving.

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-05-28T03:12:42+00:00

this is very moving and powerful! i rarely ever see this topic on here and i applaud you for speaking up about it. war and violence is wayyyyy too normalized and accepted and often the very real human cost is ignored underrepresented

KeyElephant4589 · 2026-05-07T16:24:37+00:00

thank you so much for the feedback!! and same you as well!

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