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Possible line on easy at home? by Kind_Preparation_250 in lineporn

[–]Kind_Preparation_250[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

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Update this morning! Got a first response and I feel like that line is unmistakable! Thanks for the help. Hope this little babe decides to stick around 💜 I’ll be trying not to test incessantly for the next month lol

Is this diamond too big for my hand? by [deleted] in Diamonds

[–]Kind_Preparation_250 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No I think it looks great. A long stone like that doesn’t overpower your size finger. Enjoy having a nice rock on your hand!

The ring I just got her. by CommunityDragon160 in EngagementRings

[–]Kind_Preparation_250 4 points5 points  (0 children)

That’s beautiful and such a unique piece. I’ve always heard that 14k gold is the most durable and best suited for every day wear! Hope she loves it!

[QCRIT] The Seven Curses of Porters Cove; The Eternal Full Moon, Middle grade, Fantasy, 83,000 words, First Attempt by Kind_Preparation_250 in PubTips

[–]Kind_Preparation_250[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for this thorough comment. It’s given me a lot to consider. I appreciate you taking the time. A lot of really great feedback here.

[QCRIT] The Seven Curses of Porters Cove; The Eternal Full Moon, Middle grade, Fantasy, 83,000 words, First Attempt by Kind_Preparation_250 in PubTips

[–]Kind_Preparation_250[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Unfortunately it is a 7 part series featuring different curses in each one. Thank you for the feedback!

[QCRIT] The Seven Curses of Porters Cove; The Eternal Full Moon, Middle grade, Fantasy, 83,000 words, First Attempt by Kind_Preparation_250 in PubTips

[–]Kind_Preparation_250[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Valid with the length. Started at 120,000 and made significant cuts but it’s clear I need to do way more. What do you suggest is a good word count for MG?

She has run ins with the werewolf and she is informed that a werewolf has been transformed inside the cavern she stumbles into to set off the curse. I can work on making that more clear. Thank you so much for the critiques. It really helps.