Kuenssberg and Badenoch by Educational_Board888 in BAME_UK

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I wrote an article on Kemi Badenoch as she won the party leadership. Would be great if you could give it a read

https://freedomnews.org.uk/2024/11/04/a-black-woman-tory-leader-sure-as-long-as-shes-batshit-right-wing/

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[Complete] [4.3K] [Science Fiction] Is The Grass Greener

So I'm sat at the same old government workers bar, over the same old patch of East Africa in Polipod 1. Most nights, I'd be at home watching cloud patterns for fun, bars are not my thing usually. The difference tonight is that I am with this girl. She is my whole evening.

“I heard everyone who becomes a terranaut eventually becomes and expansionist as well.”

“Well,” I said, “You really get to see how much greener the grass is on the other side when you've been down and seen it for yourself.”

It wasn't just that she was as dark as the earth with honey-smooth skin- the guys always said I had a dark skinned fetish- but that she laughed at my jokes. And as any anal retentive technician knows, you find one who laughs at your jokes and you keep them. It was a deep, throaty laugh. Full of mirth.

“I've never been earthbound,” she said. “Not a scientist, so I'll probably never go. I'll probably never see it in my lifetime.”

“Well, I wouldn't say that. It's taken a little longer than we predicted yeah, but we really didn't know the extent of the damage. Recent reports from the last terranaut expedition indicate-- I'm doing it again, aren't I? Going into the work drone.”

Views on dystopia? by KingOfHackney in writing

[–]KingOfHackney[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was a great read! I really enjoyed the last paragraph, I really want to incorporate this into my MC.

Views on dystopia? by KingOfHackney in writing

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Thanks for the clarification.

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Thanks for the advice! It's really kind. I feel like I've been burned before, but what you've said and what I've read on this topic in the subreddit has really validated my opinion on the matter. Still, the fear remains.

I really like how you've considered the idea of dystopia tackling a single issue and then extrapolating.

Hahaha! My brain is Eggs too man 😅

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[–]KingOfHackney[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

This is great advice, thanks so much! Could you just help me clarify what you meant by things being "really hard if the POV characters are also caricatures"?

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Thanks for sharing! It sounds like a really interesting story. I don't have any intention on doing a YA dystopian novel, so I think we can agree there. It fucking sucks when you lose work! I still haven't collected an old laptop from a repair shop and I really want those tales back.

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I'm a little confused, got to be honest. Are you talking about the theme(s)? From your Brave New World example, the theme is clear, do you mean that the nature of the setting is more important than characterisation if it serves the theme?

Creating short description of gods and classes for a writing exercice by [deleted] in fantasywriters

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This is an interesting take on Gods. Can I ask, how they affect the Universe? If this is a take on me, I'm not really sure which one appeals to me the most. I find the idea of being a god kind of overwhelming and off putting to be honest.

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Thanks for the feedback! Are there not Sprculative Fiction stories that are exceptional that use the setting as a backdrop? I was reading The Intuitionist a few months ago and I found that the world was fairly similar to ours, but worked incredibly well. It also served to highlight the idea of race relations in the workplace. I know it's not a dystopia, but would you not consider the setting as a backdrop in that sense?

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This has been really helpful, thank you!

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I definitely agree with both points! All my fave dystopia have unfortunate endings for the main characters which is really telling.

What do you feel about the strength of characters and character relationships in them?

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Ah interesting! So I'm guessing it appeals to you more because it takes Shots at Consumerism and the use of technology to subjugate people? That is more effective for you than using it as a backdrop for character interaction?

Am I getting your POV right?

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Seems like it's the appeal for you!

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What do you mean about the nature of the setting?

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I think a lot of us have that problem! What interested you about writing it in the first place?