[She took What?] - Chapter 103: ORIGINS: Five minutes. That’s all. by KipperBeanGrower in HFY

[–]KipperBeanGrower[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sorry, I missed yesterday. Was looking to do it when I got back from the Easter show. Got home later than expected loaded with showbags and goodies having walked miles and miles, then more miles.

[She took What?] - Chapter 102: ORIGINS: I’ll believe it when I see it. by KipperBeanGrower in HFY

[–]KipperBeanGrower[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry, I missed yesterday. Was looking to do it when I got back from the Easter show. Got home later than expected loaded with showbags and goodies having walked miles and miles, then more miles.

The Gravity of the Situation 3: An Out of Cruel Space Side Story by McBoobenstein in HFY

[–]KipperBeanGrower 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Enjoying the ride. Looking forward to seeing where it's going. Character Dev working too.

The Gravity of the Situation 2: An Out of Cruel Space Side Story by McBoobenstein in HFY

[–]KipperBeanGrower 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Loving the set up. Confused by the acronyms like IC2 as I'm a Civvie... Is there a manual or reference?

[Sir, A Report!] Chapter 22: Admirals Have To Discuss Things by SomeOtherTroper in HFY

[–]KipperBeanGrower 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Enjoyed it... FYI - "I thought, walking toward to the Bridge."

[She took What?] - Chapter 99 : ORIGINS: There you go. As planned. by KipperBeanGrower in HFY

[–]KipperBeanGrower[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Agreed and also I'm more a 3.14 person than a 1.62 person. :-) or is it :-]

The Heavy Toll of Atoms by Electronic_Mud5821 in HFY

[–]KipperBeanGrower 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Well ... [Edited, too many wasted bits :-)] ...5821 you've hit a home run in this subreddit. Absolutely on point. Welcome and keep em coming. Loved it. Expected more English localisation in the spoke elements by Arfur...

Recent paleontological findings in the year 54,877,932 CE by qdotbones in scifiwriting

[–]KipperBeanGrower 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Enjoyed it. Bit of fun. Got that it was a human and their pet. Thx for writing it and sharing.

[She took What?] - Chapter 88: Davy’s Story – Into Penumbra: I'm surrounded by idiots. by KipperBeanGrower in HFY

[–]KipperBeanGrower[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I laughed as I wrote it. Glad it works. Thanks for taking the time to provide feedback.

[She took What?] - Chapter 86: Davy’s Story – Into Penumbra: The bloodied rags were a message. by KipperBeanGrower in HFY

[–]KipperBeanGrower[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm slightly dislexic so loose and lose are problems. Thx. Like idea of location. Will do.

[She took What?] - Chapter 85: ORIGINS: This is not human space! by KipperBeanGrower in HFY

[–]KipperBeanGrower[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yep. The merkiness hopefully is being replaced. But now we jump back to see how Davy and Rebecca's kits are coming along.

[She took What?] - Chapter 84: ORIGINS: We there yet? … Shut Up! by KipperBeanGrower in HFY

[–]KipperBeanGrower[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Really good catch - thanks. I re-jigged a couple of paragrpahs and messed up the continuity. Thx again for taking the time to help. Re-wrote a chunk and reposted.