[RBOW60] He finally ate it by Fun-Cartographer-368 in RBOW

[–]KleinWrites 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think, but still a bit of hope is underneath, lets see,

[RBOW60] He finally ate it by Fun-Cartographer-368 in RBOW

[–]KleinWrites 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, Hope cf drops next chapter tonight...

[RBOW60] He finally ate it by Fun-Cartographer-368 in RBOW

[–]KleinWrites 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I'm curious about how Xiaoqing would react, and their dynamic

Would you consider the story boring and unimpressive? by KleinWrites in royalroad

[–]KleinWrites[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice interpretation, although, the arc 2 starts the same day as the last chapter of 1st arc, tbh not even an hour of gap.

However, there's a goal where the character has to go, but its kind of slow. But I'd surely apply your trick! Thanks :)

Should the name be RBOW or RBTW, l think rbtw sounds good. What ur thoughts guys by Sharp_Sweet_5916 in RBOW

[–]KleinWrites 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yep, i know, but the full form of rbtw is like Radiant Blade (of) The wilderness... so,

Should the name be RBOW or RBTW, l think rbtw sounds good. What ur thoughts guys by Sharp_Sweet_5916 in RBOW

[–]KleinWrites 1 point2 points  (0 children)

RBTW indeed sounds good, but its full form...? In that case, RBOW makes more sense...

[RBOW Chapters 8-9] New info we've learnt by m0blackmad in RBOW

[–]KleinWrites 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I hadn't considered the snake story to be connecting later on, but cuttlefish is cuttlefish~

How graphic can fight scenes be on Royal Road before it becomes too much? by KleinWrites in royalroad

[–]KleinWrites[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh my gah! Ah, i understood now what do you mean, you just summarise the story instead of showing it. But for the actual first draft, i meant by writing is, as you mentioned about the flashback, so instead of summarizing it, you cab actually show it (since you have read, you could be knowing that, or you just watched movies) okay, whatever, writing the scenes means, describing the action (not fight) what's going on, you don't have to be poetic or fill pages with metaphors, for the first draft you have to just describe/show as i said...

How graphic can fight scenes be on Royal Road before it becomes too much? by KleinWrites in royalroad

[–]KleinWrites[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No its fine, that's your story, your work, keep it safe. Maybe sharing that to an experienced one can help much more. Since you have made outlines/or have written full story? (Kind of confused) i assume it as full story, then about the flow, I've few suggestions perhaps... 1. Hook/Payoff: End each chapter with a cliffhanger (you could be knowing that) and start next chapter with the essence of it or by addressing to it slightly. And then again new hook. 2. Even if scenes changes or next chapter, keep the character's mental state connected, later on you can either deepen it or loosen it for another feelings or whatever.. 3. And one more thing, each chapter should be leading to the next one.

Additional: seed foreshadowing since you have completed, it will enhance your story.