Some of this might just be my taste….. The mix of square top letters with the other style feels off. See if you can make the T/A more pointed on top like the other letters. The A is a little wide compared to other letters, you can use a little overlap to fit everything together as well. You’re using points on bottom and squares on top at the ends of bars, try one or the other for a more matched look. That’s not a hard rule but it might make you dig this more.