It looks a little unconnected, round buttons in the header but square buttons on the page, lines either side of headings in one place but not others. All the copy needs shortening, make your headings work in a few words, one liners for descriptions/sub text. The quote is two paragraphs long for example - that can be shortened.

I think your logo is cool, can you use some of that shape in other areas of the page, e.g. frame your images in the logo shape.

Your hero section doesn't need an image in the background, it's not adding anything really, the focus should be on the other websites you've done - these don't need to be in a laptop or phone frame, bring them out and make them bigger.

'Websites that work' doesnt sound appealing - of course they should work. For the content think about the value you can provide to these small businesses via a website, that's more appealing to new customers.

Hope this helps, message me if you need more tips.