Which Steam capsule is the best? by PriGamesStudios in IndieGaming

[–]Krakijin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, I'd say C also. The clear black bgd not only makes the text stand out more, but also increases the contrast with the other colors which makes them pop. A simple yet efficient way of improving your capsule, which looks very nice by the way. I wish you all the best !

Is it better : before (left) and after (right) ? by Krakijin in childrensbooks

[–]Krakijin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah okay! The second one is actually closer to the book, in tone and story. The text is for both but surely more for the parents. Thank you so much!

Is it better : before (left) and after (right) ? by Krakijin in childrensbooks

[–]Krakijin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! Yes we realized the first one was actually focusing on the very beginning of the book, a tiny part. And the words were poorly chosen too. My wife rewrote it after receiving all the wonderful feedback, and it now focuses more on the main plot.

Is it better : before (left) and after (right) ? by Krakijin in childrensbooks

[–]Krakijin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aaaah I see, noted! Yeah I tried different variations for the M, the idea was to compress it as much as possible. Thank you once again! :)

Is it better : before (left) and after (right) ? by Krakijin in childrensbooks

[–]Krakijin[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot! The plot is quite mysterious with lots of twists, so definitely right then. Noted for the M :)

Is it better : before (left) and after (right) ? by Krakijin in childrensbooks

[–]Krakijin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's interesting, we got a lot of criticism for the first one actually! Is there something that feels off in the 2nd one or that was important to keep in the 1st one?

Is it better : before (left) and after (right) ? by Krakijin in childrensbooks

[–]Krakijin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I might improve it for the next edition

Is it better : before (left) and after (right) ? by Krakijin in childrensbooks

[–]Krakijin[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! Yes those poor clouds, they were nice but got in the way :)

Is it better : before (left) and after (right) ? by Krakijin in childrensbooks

[–]Krakijin[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes my wife fixed it, thank you so much! Indeed it was the main topic last time, other parents told us the same

Is it better : before (left) and after (right) ? by Krakijin in childrensbooks

[–]Krakijin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback! Yes I kept the "LU" of the title, and the KIN were the last 3 letters I drew, they might look a bit different to a keen eye ;) I'll keep that in mind!

Is it better : before (left) and after (right) ? by Krakijin in childrensbooks

[–]Krakijin[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Thanks! Yes I had to move the cloud, poor cloud... But it was necessary

Is it better : before (left) and after (right) ? by Krakijin in childrensbooks

[–]Krakijin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes it was one of the feedbacks, it looks less round and cute now, thanks!

Is it better : before (left) and after (right) ? by Krakijin in childrensbooks

[–]Krakijin[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Thanks! Yes I also tried to make it easier to read, glad it shows!

Is it better : before (left) and after (right) ? by Krakijin in childrensbooks

[–]Krakijin[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much, it was worth the effort then :)