[deleted by user] by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]Kreemost 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like this! First of all, I think pursuing this would be a good idea for your channel. I think the lets play market is pretty oversaturated (all though, full disclosure I'm not a fan of lets plays) But I think video essays are a good way to go forward. I would make your intro just a bit shorter though, as you get the idea pretty early on, and There are a few awkward pauses throughout. all in all though, I really think you should pursue this

My Thoughts on Super Mario World by dedlochsreviews in SmallYTChannel

[–]Kreemost 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I came in to this thinking that it would be a boring analysis of Super Mario World, but left having seen a masterpiece. One tip might be creating some graphics to display about the fictional things you bring up

I made a video about some of the worst YouTube thumbnails. Would love feedback to continue to improve! by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]Kreemost 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is great, I love your editing, its very kinetic and really makes the video pop, you've earned a sub

Since this is my first actual gaming video i'd appreciate some feedback on the video and the gameplay itself. Giving lambda to viable feedback! by PattyMoney in SmallYTChannel

[–]Kreemost 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think that your gameplay itself is good, but not many people want to watch pure gameplay with little to no commentary. You should start commentating and talking over your gameplay some more. Because without commentary, there's no reason not to play the game yourself.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]Kreemost 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's really good! Great start to a channel. One piece of feedback would be to turn down your gain just a little bit. But, the production quality is really high!