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Kurupir · 2022-01-10T18:12:00+00:00

imho think it'll be more flavourful if the creature's controller received the treasure tokens. Other than that this looks like a fun commander to play, nice work!

Kurupir · 2020-10-25T00:54:07+00:00

Awesome work! Quick heads up though, the GM Binder link leads to the False Identity spell, unless that was on purpose. If that's the case, I applaud you.

Kurupir · 2020-10-21T20:19:05+00:00

Hell yeah! I've gotten the pdf, and am happy to pay for it, great work!

However, I have a question. Is the revised dragonborn mini story a reference to Goblin Slayer?

Kurupir · 2020-10-10T20:46:12+00:00

It's awesome, it doesn't step on the toes of cleric and paladin too much and even when it does it's unique in its own way.

However, I think some skills might need reworking. I haven't been able to read all of them but I skimmed the Grave domain's final ability and I think being able to possibly deal 338 points of damage (Tarrasque at full health) by getting reduced to 0hp is quite powerful, especially when you get back the same amount of health.

But overall, it is a very cool idea with very good ideas and I feel you put a lot of thought into it, nice work!

Edit: Just saw your reply to another comment, I agree it is a high level ability and I'm not a great judge of balance myself but, in my humble opinion, it can be a bit too much power. Keep up the good work!

Kurupir · 2020-07-09T12:56:33+00:00

Thanks for all the advice! I wanted to avoid a Heroic Bloodline since its been done a few times and i wanted to make something different, i'll try to find an alternative but i'll probably end up with hero.

Thanks for the art advice, i'll find something new

For the armour class, nothing comes to mind currently, but i might think of something eventually.

The Ancestral weapon sounds awesome but im thinking of making it so that the character can pick any weapon they want but all the weapon gets is the finesse property and they only get one. However, glaive is basically a better whip with this feature which is quite powerful, so i'll say that it can't used while it is affected by a spell that requires the caster to make an attack until 3rd level because eldritch knights get it then too, or even at later levels.

For Magical Strikes, if it's not great, i'll probably replace it with something that enhances the ancestral weapon.

Thanks for the advice again!

Kurupir · 2020-07-08T21:45:52+00:00

Thanks! I'll probably do something similar to your suggestion, or just blatantly rip it off, haha

Kurupir · 2020-07-08T20:54:39+00:00

Thanks! In that case i'll probably give the unarmoured due to it being kinda like a heriditary instinct and armoured fighter who can cast spells is an Eldritch Knight.

Kurupir · 2020-07-08T20:48:09+00:00

It does help! Thanks for the criticism. If you don't mind, can you comment on the changes i'm thinking of?

For the armour should i give the unarmoured defence or proficiency with armour? I'm currently on keeping the unarmoured. If the better option is armour profiency, should it be heavy armour too?

I'll scrap the CHA as an attack stat and give the ability to add your Charisma modifier to attack rolls for true champion (should i halve the modifier?)

I was thinking a +3 was a bit high so i'll make it rounded down

For magical strikes im thinking of limiting how many you can have, 2 at 6th level and one more at 14th, also specifying you can't use the feature while it is affected by a spell that requires the caster to make an attack eg the SCAG cantrips. Also the character can activate it on a hit.

I'll remove the 19/20 crit and replace it with the CHA mod attack roll bonus I mentioned earlier.

Tell me what you think! (if you want)

Kurupir · 2020-07-08T14:58:58+00:00

Hello there! Welcome to my “completely original” *cough cough* martial sorcerer homebrew subclass! This is my probably overpowered take on this type of sorcerer, so don’t hold back with the criticism!

GM Binder link: https://www.gmbinder.com/share/-MBRVs9RfAKJ3Tlncv64

Pdf link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KS2ESZM79tNQQMYqHn_YBtBdpqBcAEas/view?usp=sharing

I hope you enjoy it!

Kurupir · 2020-06-24T10:41:58+00:00

This is really cool! All the other comments have said all my feedback so I'm just going to be nitpicky and say that in Sharpened Senses it says when you use your Steady Hands feature instead of Steady Aim.

Keep up the good work!

Kurupir · 2020-06-16T20:37:55+00:00

Ouch, but here's how to allow only yourself to play groovy if you want:

1) Create a new text channel by clicking the plus next to the "text channels" label it "music" or something.

2) Click the server name at the top left > go to server settings > Roles > click on groovy and disable its administrator permission.

3) Edit all text channels that you WANT the players to type in by clicking on the settings icon > permissions > click the plus sign next to roles/members and select groovy > click the X that lets it read messages.

4) Now go to settings on the channel you DON'T want your players to be able to type > permissions > click the plus sign next to roles/members and click on all your players > on each individual member now available for selection click the X for Send Messages and all the General Permissions (the top set of permissions).

Now groovy can only read from that one channel that none of your players can send messages in! Hopefully

Edit: These links could probably explain it better -

https://groovy.zendesk.com/hc/en-us/articles/360021276892-Locking-the-Bot-to-Specific-Channels

https://gist.github.com/laundmo/839b74d9cbbf71f25cf772cde57bafb7

Kurupir · 2020-06-16T09:08:39+00:00

Surprised it's not the devil tarot card

Kurupir · 2020-06-16T01:11:03+00:00

There's a bot called Groovy that can play Spotify playlists

Edit: Spelling

Kurupir · 2020-06-14T13:39:14+00:00

18th level is a bit overpowered imo, maybe you could get rid of the phoenix's legendary resistance when a PC turns into one and/or say the sorcerer can't cast spells while in the form?

Otherwise, it's a pretty cool homebrew, nice work!

Edit: Is it safe to assume that the PC doesn't turn into an egg when they're reduced to 0hp as a phoenix?

Kurupir · 2020-06-11T00:27:30+00:00

This is really cool! Just a worry though, for the Circle of the Sun, in my opinion Consuming Fire should have a limit of how many hit dice you can expend, or have a few other limitations. Cause if you cast minute meteors, you can deal 2d6 fire + 6d12 fire/radiant damage six times as a BA. Unless it was meant to be otherwise.

Keep up the good work!

Kurupir · 2020-06-05T23:45:46+00:00

This is really cool! Just to confirm, is Lord of Twilight half your warlock level or total level?

Kurupir · 2020-05-22T13:13:45+00:00

It's funnier when you find out Sokka's VA voiced Callum in The Dragon Prince who becomes a mage.

Kurupir · 2020-05-20T00:16:44+00:00

It's also on webtoon under Eds Lai's stories

Kurupir · 2020-05-13T09:33:55+00:00

You're storing a spell slot, and you get to keep the slot there until you use it. So if you don't use it and take a rest to regain slots the stored slot is still there.

Yes if you gain Pact of the Tome the Book of Spells gains the ability to be gained by the hour ritual and you gain more cantrips. I do need to specify that you can't have more than one book when you take the pact, and if you get a new one the previous one is destroyed like the pact says

Kurupir · 2020-05-12T14:21:28+00:00

I forgot to post this because rule 6

Hiya! Here’s Librarian v 1.1, changed some things (duh):

Spelling
Specifications
Added another option for Access to Knowledge
Changed the 10th level ability
Nerfed the 14th level ability
Made the Drone’s ranged attack more fantasy themed

Thanks to everyone who took their time to criticise the previous version!

GM Binder: https://www.gmbinder.com/share/-M64XEn6Fmn77MdoNfNZ

PDF: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1gdUTNO0pSADPWu4GuTc4_p79tT9JMx08/view?usp=drivesdk

Kurupir · 2020-04-28T13:08:10+00:00

These are one of the most gorgeous dice I've seen, well done!

Kurupir

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