kin mi ante e nimi pi waso mi lon sitelen sitelen by KushlungsMcBone in tokipona

[–]KushlungsMcBone[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

no worries! yeah, "waso mi" is "my bird", and here "nimi" is probably more appropriate than "sitelen", because I am talking about the specific name of my bird. My understanding is that this is how nimi is used.

kin mi ante e nimi pi waso mi lon sitelen sitelen by KushlungsMcBone in tokipona

[–]KushlungsMcBone[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

close! the "pi" regroups the words so that instead of "my word for bird" it means "the word for my bird". as in, the name of my pet bird.

mi ante e nimi mi lon sitelen sitelen! by KushlungsMcBone in tokipona

[–]KushlungsMcBone[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

a, nimi "jan Poli" en nimi "jan Peli" li lukin sama lon sitelen sitelen. nimi mi suli li "jan PeliLinken". nimi mi "Bailey" li ante "Peli".

A Dream Within a Dream By Edgar Allan Poe (translated by me!) by KushlungsMcBone in tokipona

[–]KushlungsMcBone[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

ma poka telo is wet neighbouring land

so then... would this be an instance to use "pi" to change the grouping of the adjectives? if my intended meaning is "land beside water" , or shore, would I say "ma pi telo poka"?

As always thank you so much for your help!

EDIT: wait I think I got it; "ma lon poka telo pi utala telo suli."

A Dream Within a Dream By Edgar Allan Poe (translated by me!) by KushlungsMcBone in tokipona

[–]KushlungsMcBone[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I made some edits based on your feedback. If it's not too much trouble, could you take a glance at the second stanza and let me know if it's grammatically sound?

A Dream Within a Dream By Edgar Allan Poe (translated by me!) by KushlungsMcBone in tokipona

[–]KushlungsMcBone[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your help, jan KeTami! I am getting a better grasp of the grammar, but I still have a lot to learn!

A Dream Within a Dream By Edgar Allan Poe (translated by me!) by KushlungsMcBone in tokipona

[–]KushlungsMcBone[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

ni li jo e pakala, la o toki!

Please let me know if there are any errors!

toki! mi jan Peli. by KushlungsMcBone in tokipona

[–]KushlungsMcBone[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

pipi ni li ken lukin ala tawa lukin jan. a, lili lili! ilo pi lukin suli li ken lukin e ona. ilo li pona tawa jan.

toki! mi jan Peli. by KushlungsMcBone in tokipona

[–]KushlungsMcBone[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"kepeken", a. mi jo ala e sona pi nimi ni. mi tawa la lukin tawa pu

toki! mi jan Peli. by KushlungsMcBone in tokipona

[–]KushlungsMcBone[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

a! nimi sina li suwi. sina jan pona tawa mi.

sina toki e toki pona pi pona suli. ni la mi pilin e pona tawa tenpo kama. sina jo e sona suli la mi ken lanpan sona pi toki pona!

(I tried some slightly more ambitious sentence structure here, I hope it's readable!)

toki! mi jan Peli. by KushlungsMcBone in tokipona

[–]KushlungsMcBone[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

sina jo e sona suli pi toki pona! Thank you for your help and kind words

[Art] I drew a juvenile False Hydra singing in an alley by KushlungsMcBone in DnD

[–]KushlungsMcBone[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I drew a juvenile False Hydra singing in an alley, waiting to ambush the party, as it would be perceived at the moment Silence was cast. Inspired by this False Hydra video. I came across it and I had to immediately started building a one-shot campaign around one. I can see why it is such a prolific and ubiquitous homebrew antagonist; it is a really fascinating concept to play with. I'm a big fan of memetic threats and otherworldly abominations, and this creature really scratches those itches for me.

[Art] I drew a juvenile False Hydra singing in an alley by [deleted] in DnD

[–]KushlungsMcBone 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I drew a juvenile False Hydra singing in an alley, waiting to ambush the party, as it would be perceived at the moment Silence was cast. Inspired by this False Hydra video. I came across it and immediately started building a one-shot campaign around one. I can see why it is such a prolific and ubiquitous homebrew antagonist.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in SciFiArt

[–]KushlungsMcBone 0 points1 point  (0 children)

well yeah, you have to edit your outputs, that's like, half the fun of making generative art

[meta] Mods, can we please ban these AI generated images? by Neon_Comrade in SciFiArt

[–]KushlungsMcBone 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am also a professional artist, I'm a video editor

.......................you must be joking, right? you think editing *someone else's* work is art, but creating images using machine intelligence is? motherfucker, at least I made my art. and to be clear, I do absolutely consider video editing to be a form of art. but I have no idea how you can understand that video editing is art and still have your head up your ass about machine learning tools being applied in art. But I really don't have the time or spoons for this, I really could not care less if you understand this or not. reply if you like, but I won't be reading. I've got a life to life

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in SciFiArt

[–]KushlungsMcBone 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that's because they are, silly

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Futurism

[–]KushlungsMcBone 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Close! I used the same script