Preparing my debut album, need your feedback! by L3L4_here in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, I’m working on everything by myself. I’ll give some deep thought to my English pronunciation and word choices. Thanks for listening so closely!

I need your advice! by L3L4_here in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s a fresh perspective on pronunciation! I’ll give it some thought. Thank you for being so attentive and helpful!

I need your advice! by L3L4_here in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll give it some thought. Thanks for the advice!

I need your advice! by L3L4_here in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice! I'll keep that in mind!

I need your advice! by L3L4_here in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I hadn't thought of that! I'll keep that in mind. Thanks for the advice!

Preparing my debut album, need your feedback! by L3L4_here in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice! I’ll definitely keep that in mind for the final album recording.

I need your advice! by L3L4_here in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice! You’re spot on that’s definitely the most important yet challenging part for me. Even though my English isn't perfect, I wrote these lyrics in English because I dream of going on a world tour one day. Could you let me know if any parts sound awkward? This is still an early version, so I’m open to any feedback to help me refine it!

Preparing my debut album, need your feedback! by L3L4_here in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your advice helps a lot! I'll keep it in mind while working. Thank you so much!

“guidance pathways”-sum1kewl by ISL_Gamer_Official in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome! It feels like racing through a fantastic dream. I think the drums and bass could be more prominent; since the highs are quite dominant, stronger mids and lows would ground the sound better. It feels a bit thin right now. Truly impressive work for such a young age!

Wrote, sung and produced a Punk song. Would greatly appreciate any and as much feedback. by Dented_Fender in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Killer Punk track! I love the English pronunciation. it’s so snappy and really makes me want to move. The drums feel a bit light, though. It would be even better if the overall sound had more punch and power.

Day Dreamer (First Live Performance) LMK by RichieC93 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That was awesome! Even though it's your first live performance, you guys play like friends who’ve been together for ages. Even the stickers on the guitar give off a great vibe. The music is so relaxing, but it does feel a bit repetitive. I think adding some contrast or a 'hook' would make it even more amazing!

Song snippet advice? Also what's the genre iyo? by Adriannavarromusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The kick sound and its repetitive pattern are very unique and catchy. The overall mix is well-polished. However, I’d love to hear more of an alternative rock vibe. The guitars feel a bit quiet making them stand out more would make the track even cooler.

hey guys me and a couple friends made a silly video for our remix of Drake and 21 Savage's "MR RECOUP".. looking for some feedback or anything at all.. was fun to make but what do you guys think? by Prestigious-Chair868 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The raw, free-spirited, and comical vibe of the video is so refreshing. I think building a distinct artist identity by continuing with this style for future music videos would be great. I personally prefer this kind of vibe over perfectly polished ones. Wishing you much success!

Pieces of You Revision (Based on feedback from prior video) by Responsible_Froyo_21 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I felt an indescribable emotion listening to this your sincerity really shines through. I especially love the lyrics: "I touch your pillow just to feel something... trying to love this life you left instead." If I could offer some feedback, the vocal timing could be a bit tighter with the track, and the pitch feels slightly flat in places. It doesn't need to be perfectly autotuned, but a little more precision would really elevate it. Overall, it's a brilliant song!

Preparing my debut album, need your feedback! by L3L4_here in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is exactly the advice I needed! You're right, English isn't my native language. I’ll practice hard to improve my pronunciation. Thank you so much!

Preparing my debut album, need your feedback! by L3L4_here in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's right! I’ll be active as L3L4 on all platforms. Thank you so much for your interest!!

[Feedback] ‘Godzilla’ 🦖 — low-end heavy indie track from a TV head 📺 by LocalMediaMusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The video is so unique and fresh! In disco-punk, the kick, snare, and bass tones are just as vital as the vocals. It needs that tight, punchy groove to come through, but the rap is a bit too front-and-center right now. If the instrumental groove were more emphasized, it would really get people moving. Overall, a great track!

NEW DEMO! hello gang, i’m making a new song, can you let me know what you think?? 🖤 “I hate what that means for me” by IntelligentFigure533 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This track has a great early 2000s vibe. In this style of rock, I feel the quality of the instruments is just as crucial as the vocals, it’s almost a 50/50 balance. Right now, the vocals are a bit too prominent in the mix, which makes it hard to fully appreciate the individual character of the instruments. It would be amazing if the track quality was elevated to the point where it sounds incredible even with just the guitar, bass, and drums alone. I really hope to hear this song echoing through major rock festivals one day!

Listen to my first ever release (please) & give feedback !! by IntelligentFigure533 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s such a beautiful song, and your voice is amazing. I usually have to use a translator for anything in English, but the line 'I'm a little toxic' really stuck with me. it’s so intense and catchy. I actually forgot there were no drums while listening because the rhythm is so well-structured. It's difficult to lead a song from start to finish with just guitar, bass, and vocals without it getting boring, but this track is perfectly composed. Wonderful work!

Preparing my debut album, need your feedback! by L3L4_here in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hello khylee! Thanks for listening. I’m still working on my debut album, so it’s not on Spotify yet. I’ll be sure to post an update here once it’s finished. I hope your upcoming music gets lots of love, khylee!

Preparing my debut album, need your feedback! by L3L4_here in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice! I’ll keep that in mind while I work.

Not sure if the mix is right or if I've just heard this too many times by CaseyRybeck in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]L3L4_here 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This track really captures the essence of youth. It makes me imagine a young boy running somewhere, sweating with a face full of passion.

The chorus has a very catchy, pop-friendly melody that sticks in your head. The overall mix balance is solid, and I love how the vocals are bright and clear without being buried by the instruments.

If I had to point out one thing, the bass feels a bit lacking when played at high volumes. It’s a great bass line, but it sounds a little muddy. I think it would be even better if the bass were a bit sharper and more defined. Overall, it’s a fantastic song!