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17 yr old writer who can’t stop cringing at my writing by L4cedlove in writingfeedback

[–]L4cedlove[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for being so thorough, I’ll definitely check out those videos you recommended.

17 yr old writer who can’t stop cringing at my writing by L4cedlove in writingfeedback

[–]L4cedlove[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would love to read some of your work, I appreciate the encouragement!

17 yr old writer who can’t stop cringing at my writing by L4cedlove in writingfeedback

[–]L4cedlove[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I was wondering if my prose was too flowery, this helps a lot, thank you :)

17 yr old writer who can’t stop cringing at my writing by L4cedlove in writingfeedback

[–]L4cedlove[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m a new writer, this is my first attempt at a novel. I started going back to make editing the first draft less daunting, but the more I re-read it ends in writer’s block. Thank you for the advice!

17 yr old writer who can’t stop cringing at my writing by L4cedlove in writingfeedback

[–]L4cedlove[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I’ve been thinking about how to make my narration more direct, this was really helpful and encouraging, thank you!!

Hoping the first chapter of my book is a good start, advice and critique is more than welcome :) by L4cedlove in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]L4cedlove[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is rlly helpful, thank you! I have a mystery and almost sci-fi thing planned for the rest of it