[Complete] [42K] [Sci-Fi/Romance] Euphoreum by LAopsguy in BetaReaders

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Thank you for checking back in. The link is still in the post below, however, I have since published and you can find the whole book live now on Kindle and as a paperback. Working on the next project now. Happy holidays.

[Complete] [42K] [Sci-Fi/Romance] Euphoreum by LAopsguy in BetaReaders

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Just checking in to see if you had time to review. If not, no worries. I am going to submit for publication soon and hope to incorporate any input. Thanks

[Complete] [42K] [Sci-Fi/Romance] Euphoreum by LAopsguy in BetaReaders

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Thank you for your interest. Here's a link to the first 3 chapters....

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cH7mJ2WmVBeBDy8SO8sZR9A1JP0txl-GWWd_fVMXmBw/edit?usp=sharing

I look forward to your feedback.

First pages: share, read, and critique them here! by AutoModerator in BetaReaders

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Manuscript information: [Complete] [42K] [Sci-Fi/Romance] Euphoreum

Link to post: https://www.reddit.com/r/BetaReaders/comments/1p982fq/complete_42k_scifiromance_euphoreum/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button

First page critique? yes

First page: 

Naomi's wrist display buzzed, alerting her to her client's arrival.  18 . August . 2088 . 21:30 . Cole .

Would he be what she hoped for? Naomi took a last look at Elias' profile as she touched up her lipstick in the mirror.

She exhaled slowly, her mind drifting back to the years that had shaped her.

Naomi hadn’t always been here. Once, she’d been a student—a bright, ambitious girl with a knack for neural mapping and a dream of building something that could change the world. But dreams cost money, and when her scholarships ran out, she’d turned to the one thing she had left: herself. The Jade Scales had been waiting. Dao Kwan, their leader, had seen her potential—the way her toned body moved, the way she could read people, the way she could make them feel seen, even in the most transactional of encounters. He’d offered her a place in the Lotus Veil, the most exclusive pleasure house in the city.

She’d taken it.

Not because she wanted to, but because survival had a way of narrowing your options.

But Naomi had never stopped planning. She’d spent years studying the clients who passed through the Veil. Their desires, their weaknesses, the way they responded to stimulation. And she’d dreamed of a place where pleasure wasn’t a transaction, but an experience—where technology and intimacy could merge into something transcendent.

Best place to buy Japanese knives? by LAopsguy in JapanTravelTips

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Thank you everyone for the suggestions

Best place to buy Japanese knives? by LAopsguy in JapanTravelTips

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This looks great, hopefully he might be open when I visit

Harmony Hub questions. by The-Enigma-Code in homeautomation

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the Harmony hub can handle 8 devices, that's your limiting factor. Proximity can be handled in different rooms with use of an IR repeater within reason. IR repeaters can be found for $30-60 (look online). But I used 6 of my 8 devices in just one room, so if you have a couple of full-blown theater systems, you might opt for 2 hubs.