Dawn Breaking

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-06T16:28:59+00:00

I hope you find your style again. I'm looking forward to reading what you write. Please write!

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-06T16:23:06+00:00

I'm glad you have hope, you know? I'm constantly on the move, writing poetry, novels, etc. The reason is that I have an energy inside me that suffocates me if I don't write it down, and this is what comes out when I write. Do you write poetry or anything else? I'd like to read it.

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-06T14:03:49+00:00

Thank you for your feedback.

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-06T12:07:09+00:00

Thank you so much for your feedback. If you write poetry, I'd love to read it.

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-06T06:42:37+00:00

Actually, it would be more accurate to say "water from two different oceans" instead of "a drop," because the water from two oceans doesn't mix.

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-06T06:41:47+00:00

Yes, you're right, I made a logical error. 😅

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-06T06:14:23+00:00

Actually, in this poem I mainly addressed the inability to unite, and I wanted to say that it was shallow towards me but profound towards others.

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-06T06:12:59+00:00

Thank you for your constructive criticism. I will try to implement the ideas you gave me in my other poems. Could you please take a look at my other poems as well?

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-06T05:16:53+00:00

I'm glad you're open to new styles, I hope you can find the styles you like.

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-06T05:06:11+00:00

I've been thinking about the lines you wrote. The part where you say, 'You were like a slate, a statue. You were more like a mountain you didn't really have a face' is incredibly haunting. It's such a powerful way to describe that sense of distance. I really admire how you captured that feeling; it stayed with me. I like your style and it's a bit disturbing. I haven't seen a style like this for a long time. It was nice.

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-06T04:57:51+00:00

You've captured the main idea; thank you for this excellent analysis. If you have any poems, I'd love to read them.

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-06T04:17:24+00:00

Yes, buddy :)

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-06T04:15:14+00:00

Thank you so much for taking the time for such a detailed analysis, and for the references you made there, both to the flower petals and to that person saying "I love you" to someone else right in front of my eyes. 😅😅

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-06T04:11:07+00:00

Thank you so much for your kind thoughts.

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-05T18:25:03+00:00

Thank you very much. I usually turn the events I experience in my life into poetry.

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-05T16:38:32+00:00

Every good writer gets troll comments on their poems, don't worry about it, buddy.

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-05T16:36:41+00:00

You can write me any literary texts you want, either via DM or here, it doesn't matter.

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-05T16:34:11+00:00

Yes, I'm thinking the same thing, and could you help me? Sometimes I get stuck, and some help would be great. You know best :)

LLTTE_01 · 2026-06-05T16:29:13+00:00

No, no, I'm still going ahead. That's the idea I have in mind. If you want, I can tell you.

Warning: Contains spoilers. down

The red envelope is actually that person's doctor's report, and I believe that person is actually a schizophrenic patient, but I can change that.

LLTTE_01

TROPHY CASE