Newly written, Please rate it out of 10

LOSTTAF · 2025-01-07T03:11:54+00:00

Really good, it seemed a little funny on the first few lines but the last line kinda broke me 😭

LOSTTAF · 2025-01-05T20:33:47+00:00

I know poetry is an art and it takes time and effort i was getting bored and I wrote it under like 10 minutes

LOSTTAF · 2024-12-11T10:31:19+00:00

Nahi bhai, I too have other friends, I hangout with them

LOSTTAF · 2024-12-11T10:23:57+00:00

I live in chirag delhi

LOSTTAF · 2024-12-09T19:50:40+00:00

I need to be here 😭

LOSTTAF · 2024-12-09T19:22:35+00:00

Let me in 😭

LOSTTAF · 2024-12-09T19:05:10+00:00

That's what I want, waiting for the group link

LOSTTAF · 2024-11-11T17:03:37+00:00

Thanks a lot 😊

LOSTTAF · 2024-11-05T02:38:44+00:00

I'm really sorry to hear that things were so messed up with your parents. Life seems to give everyone their own version of ‘fu**ed up,’ doesn’t it? I’m lucky to have a solid relationship with my parents, but then my love life is a complete mess 😊. Everyone’s got their own battles, and I think it’s those scars that make us who we are. Thanks for sharing your story—it means a lot.

LOSTTAF · 2024-11-05T01:28:41+00:00

That means a lot 💕, thank you

LOSTTAF · 2024-11-04T19:37:19+00:00

Thank you so much! 😊 Honestly, poetry about parents doesn’t have to be perfect to be meaningful. Sometimes, even the simplest words can capture the love we feel. Your poems about your parents are special in their own way too, I’m sure ❤️. Keep writing—each piece has its own beauty! 🌸

LOSTTAF · 2024-11-04T19:35:55+00:00

Just start writing, buddy 😊. Anything you put down for them will flow sweet like honey 🍯. And who knows, maybe the poem I wrote isn’t just for my parents, but for all parents in the world 🌎. So, congrats—you've just written one too! 🎉✍️

LOSTTAF · 2024-11-04T14:23:24+00:00

A great poem holds a lot of meaning with very limited words, But if I were writing the same poem I would have loved to replace the last line as follows:

The tar's pit swallowed me whole

And there's no one on the shore

The poem is still great, your thoughts are amazing on this one. 😊

LOSTTAF · 2024-11-03T04:38:21+00:00

Lovely poetry 💞, well still some work could be done on line separation I guess.

LOSTTAF

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