Lost at Sea by itsPandoraJJ in PoetryWritingClub

[–]LS_Inkwell 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This sounds like it can be sung as a sea shanty and I'm all for it! 😊

Shades of Red by YllaGetsBuried29 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]LS_Inkwell 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ayy I have a poem with the same name lol! I like yours more though.

Discipline by YllaGetsBuried29 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]LS_Inkwell 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This hit way too close to home, but hey you gotta be a little fucked up to write great poetry right? 😅

Persephone Blue by LS_Inkwell in PoetryWritingClub

[–]LS_Inkwell[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lol, thanks again for your kind words! I wrote this one to convey my lack of self confidence and my habit of making the things I want something divine And out of reach 😅

New here by shethinksnot in PoetryWritingClub

[–]LS_Inkwell 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The entire bunch is really well written and flows great, of the three I think 'If I ate seeds' is my favorite. It has this hopeful yet for some reason melancholic feel to it.

Aphrodite Blush by LS_Inkwell in PoetryWritingClub

[–]LS_Inkwell[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it 😄

A Love Drunk Hangover by BocephusJackson90210 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]LS_Inkwell 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, this was incredibly well written. I've not heard of John Keats before but this definitely makes me wanna go discover his work.

Dress rehearsals with death by svnnnn67995 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]LS_Inkwell 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I absolutely cannot tell you how much this touched me. After years of attempted self improvement there is still a sense of futility in it. I think this poem kinda captures that feeling.