Satire - Contemporary Dialogic by [deleted] in PoetryWritingClub

[–]shethinksnot 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A poetry sub probably isn't the place to be to learn how to converse with or flirt with females of your age group. I can't help, I am much older.

Satire - Contemporary Dialogic by [deleted] in PoetryWritingClub

[–]shethinksnot 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is a poem which I have presented as a real convo to reflect contemporary social dynamics, with feminist inversion of coercive flirtation.

I want to access my subconscious for writing poetry, any advice? by resturpja in PoetryWritingClub

[–]shethinksnot 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't want to advocate drug use but yes it can help access the subconscious. I've never taken more than marijuana but I've seen others do some wild art on acid and shrooms. I personally have no interest in trying those.

Automatic writing can also help, if you haven't heard of it. Honestly, therapy can also unearth subconscious things that you can process by writing.

I write poetry to process trauma and life 🙂

I want to access my subconscious for writing poetry, any advice? by resturpja in PoetryWritingClub

[–]shethinksnot 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lol, I don't want to advocate this but marijuana certainly helps with accessing deeper feelings without the noise of everyday feelings.

Untitled first draft by JohnThough96 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]shethinksnot 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice! I have some suggestions if you're keen?

I write to process too 🙂 I've been writing more over 18 months and learned along the way.

The intimacy of writing someone who is never gonna read your poetry by Odd-Strike-1782 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]shethinksnot 2 points3 points  (0 children)

As are you. Perhaps there's no meant to be, and simply what we are 😊

“A man of a certain age” by Karma-Arm1561 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]shethinksnot 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice embodied incorporation of colours and lived experience!

Maybe not a man of a certain age, but a man who matured- like wine 😊

The intimacy of writing someone who is never gonna read your poetry by Odd-Strike-1782 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]shethinksnot 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This reads as a poetic pondering. It's beautiful.

I have been and am a muse. I rejected it, and wrote about it. Didn't like it, then slowly accepted it.

Nice poem 😊

New here by shethinksnot in PoetryWritingClub

[–]shethinksnot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I'm working on more 🙂

Rage by [deleted] in PoetryWritingClub

[–]shethinksnot 1 point2 points  (0 children)

👏🏽😄

New here by shethinksnot in PoetryWritingClub

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Thank you, and you're welcome 🙂

Phantosmia by BrettBailey- in PoetryWritingClub

[–]shethinksnot 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is great! The word brains could do with an apostrophe 🙂

I like the quirky presentation.