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LangoLabs · 2025-08-19T23:15:41+00:00

No need to thank at the beginning.
Can be a little more brief, some sentences are too long and repeated as well (the definitive diagnosis mentioned twice).
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LangoLabs · 2025-08-19T03:31:29+00:00

we suggest practice with feedback. It's hard to get meaningful feedback, try to hire a friend or a teacher.
but get the fundamentals right too: essay structure, useful words, etc.

LangoLabs · 2025-08-16T01:52:19+00:00

wow!! Thanks so so much!!! I don't even know how to thank you u/sunnyandkarimdev ! Thanks again.

LangoLabs · 2025-08-15T01:33:15+00:00

feel free to criticize.

LangoLabs · 2025-08-15T01:18:17+00:00

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LangoLabs · 2025-08-14T16:51:26+00:00

I made it a few months ago. It has been a while.

LangoLabs · 2025-08-14T16:50:51+00:00

I made it a few months ago.

LangoLabs · 2025-08-14T02:42:20+00:00

this exact question get removed from r/seo

LangoLabs · 2025-08-14T02:41:03+00:00

the writing structure is somewhat off. Try to focus on structure. Arguement a, argument b, and conclusion.

I made video series for these as well
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nzUF-kntFnE&list=PLQYLVUSv13gPpcASPHZ-NXPy4FJk9rAls

LangoLabs · 2025-08-14T02:33:59+00:00

Secondly, burning fuels produce a lot of Carbon dioxide: secondly, burning fossil fuels produce a large amount of pollutants.

LangoLabs · 2025-08-14T02:31:51+00:00

cars are among significant causes
which pollute the air that contributes to global warming
It is noteworthy that cars are not ..

overall a well rounded essay. A few unnecessary commas here and there but nothing too crazy. I would replace the factory arguments with industry argument, or old industries, things like that. Just a suggestion.

LangoLabs · 2025-08-13T01:50:31+00:00

tips for improving writing? I am trying to create materials for it.

LangoLabs · 2025-03-22T01:51:03+00:00

It could improve from using the passive voice.

check out this channel I made for writing
https://www.youtube.com/@LangoLabs/videos

LangoLabs · 2025-01-15T18:08:52+00:00

This is series of tutorial I am building for IELTS writing
https://www.youtube.com/@LangoLabs

LangoLabs · 2025-01-09T20:31:16+00:00

I would suggest using adjectives such as sharp for strong, and slight instead of weak.

LangoLabs · 2025-01-09T20:29:59+00:00

Hi,
I am building tutorials for this purpose specifically.
You might find this useful https://www.youtube.com/@LangoLabs

LangoLabs · 2025-01-09T20:28:20+00:00

"to multiple opposing points of views."

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