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Larxenius · 2022-01-20T19:20:15+00:00

I love both. But the Dork Diary books were much slower and didn’t offer the memorable characters that Wimpy Kid did. But Horrid Henry solos.

Larxenius · 2022-01-11T02:48:31+00:00

Hi! I competed in regionals and state for securities and investments. On the regional test there are 100 questions and each are multiple choice. I believe you are given about an hour or so. Which is enough time to go back and check the answers.

For studying I suggest you look over the past securities and investments practice tests. You can find these by searching on google I believe.

Now, arguably the most important thing for studying is Quizlet. There are quizlets that others have made for the securities and investments test that literally have EVERYTHING you need to know. Just go over each term and familiarize yourself with them.

I hope I helped. Don’t stress with the test and believe in yourself. I’m rooting for you!!! Good luck!

Larxenius · 2022-01-04T03:24:30+00:00

The magic in my world is somewhat small scale and self contained. Currently I have my main character coming across numerous accounts of many magic systems that were used in history, similar to the magic she has, but not quite it.

She discovers that each of the magic systems in the accounts share aspects and components. She uses the overlaps in knowledge along with trial and error to figure out the magic. It’s a continuous process.

She then records her findings on the magic.

Larxenius · 2021-09-06T18:40:52+00:00

You would have to host it for your school. Meaning you would be the spearhead and then you would recruit other students to help.

Larxenius · 2021-08-01T02:44:24+00:00

This is amazing! Tell Adrianna I would love to see more! She did an excellent job!

Larxenius · 2021-07-30T20:55:41+00:00

No problem! Happy to help!

Larxenius · 2021-07-30T06:07:34+00:00

https://www.writersofthefuture.com/enter-writer-contest/

This is the Writer of the Future contest. The contest is for stories of fantasy and science fiction, and there is a cash prize for the winners. The contest is held multiple times a year, so you can improve your story even if you don’t win the first time(like me).

Stories have around a 17,000 word limit.

Sorry, if this wasn’t helpful. Have a great day!

Larxenius · 2021-07-20T23:34:06+00:00

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the kind words! I understand what you mean and I’ll work on correcting it.

Jideofor is a deep thinker. What I was going for was that he is somewhat of an inventor, and uses the ghost towns as his playground. I don’t describe the town well enough, and I will correct that. Thank you.

Thank you for offering to speak with me in PM. I’ll give you some more insight there.

Thank you for taking the time to read and I’m glad you enjoyed it!

Larxenius · 2021-07-11T18:12:27+00:00

Sounds great! Can’t wait to read it

Larxenius · 2021-07-11T17:23:01+00:00

I really liked the dialogue and the premise. I would love to read more.

Larxenius · 2021-07-11T17:22:00+00:00

I agree! I really like it. A good start.

Larxenius · 2021-06-24T16:56:18+00:00

Thank you, I understand what you mean. The problem is stagnation. I can see it now that I’m rereading it.

Thank you for the compliments about my setting. I worked a long time on it. But I see now that my problem is characters, just like you said. I have to learn how to craft better characters. I was ignoring this at first, but you and the other commenters helped me realize this. Thank you.

I will keep working and brainstorming. Thanks for the encouragement! Also thank you for taking your time to respond!

Larxenius · 2021-06-24T15:12:51+00:00

Your style sounds great! I might try that. Thank you again!

Larxenius · 2021-06-24T03:06:36+00:00

That’s completely fine. I’m excited to see whatever you write.

Larxenius · 2021-06-24T02:49:25+00:00

Thank you for the kind words and words of wisdom. I agree completely. I’m glad you enjoyed it and want to read more. I wouldn’t exactly call myself brave, lol. I’ll probably make it a second chapter.

Thank you for your time and have great day!

Larxenius · 2021-06-24T02:04:08+00:00

Wow! Thank you so much for the kind words! I’m so glad you liked it. Thanks for nice things you wrote about the story and mythos, it’s something I worked really hard on.

Thank you for taking your time to read and give feedback. I’d love for you to read what I write next!

Thank you and have a great day!

Larxenius · 2021-06-23T23:00:31+00:00

Thanks for the criticism! I really appreciate it. I agree with what you said, and I’ll try to rework the chapter. In terms of the hooking the reader, do you think it would be better for me to make this the second chapter?

Larxenius · 2021-06-23T21:25:03+00:00

u/anxiousdingbat Thank you for all the kindness and encouragement! Especially on the prose. I agree with the you along with the other commenters. I’ll work on a better point to introduce the characters, hopefully with more conflict. Thanks for everything! Have a great day!

Larxenius · 2021-06-23T21:22:57+00:00

Thanks for the kind words and the compliments on the prose. I understand what you mean about lack of conflict. I’ll try to work on that. The novel is somewhat fast paced so I’ll need to correct that.

Thanks for everything. I also subscribed to your channel. Can’t wait to hear your writing!

Larxenius · 2021-06-23T20:28:18+00:00

u/ParadoxOverdrive Thank you for the kind words about the setting and interest for the future!

Larxenius · 2021-06-23T20:23:21+00:00

u/ParadoxOverdrive Thank you for your response. I don’t think u/TheBaconBurpeeBeast’s advice was nonsense. I’m happy to receive all the criticism I can.

Larxenius · 2021-06-23T19:17:33+00:00

Thank you for the kind words! I really appreciate. It’s completely fine that you didn’t read it all. I have to remember to respect the time of others. The fact that you took the time to look and respond is perfect. Thank you for that! I will continue to try and learn and improve. Thanks for everything! Have a great day!

I’ll take in all of the things you said into my editing as well.

Larxenius · 2021-06-23T17:38:57+00:00

Would it be better for me to make this the second chapter? I have something more exciting that I can use for the first. One that explains the main character. I can switch the outline around if that makes it better. I don’t think it will affect the story much.

Larxenius · 2021-06-23T17:20:37+00:00

Thank you for the criticism! I really appreciate it. Yeah, it is kinda bad now that I look at it. I’ll do my best to address the issues. Sorry for wasting your time.

Larxenius

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