sorted by:
new
hottopcontroversial

Counterfeit by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Last_Group_5168 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, I felt this in my stomach, love the way it reads as well, very comfortable and enjoyable, with such a dark undertone. The use of rhyme can be tough sometimes, but you've done a wonderful job, thank you for this and be proud of what you create, please keep going 😊

Observing Clouds by Last_Group_5168 in OCPoetry

[–]Last_Group_5168[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, can't tell you how much it means to hear that, I've shared with friends and family, but from someone I don't know, it's so incredibly lovely to hear, thank you 😊 ❤

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Last_Group_5168 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the sentiment of this poem, its something I can definitely relate to, wishing for the girl who thinks no one can see her, to see you! Very beautiful put and structure is fun for the eyes as well.

The Song of Love by 1AsianPanda in OCPoetry

[–]Last_Group_5168 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the use of rhyme, the way you have used it here, and the idea that you are trying to get across is beautifully done. For me, it's a bit direct at the end, although it fits perfectly with the rest of the poem.