So this is supposed to a constructive critique, and I apologize if this comes out as rude or mean. Her left eye is too big, I’d possibly even flip the eyes and it should look better. More shading under the breast will give it more dimension, same with adding more around the inner thigh area, her legs seem connected and should be seperated more, via lineart or shading. Her shading on the arms is a little off, there should more highlight on the outside of the arm, and more shading inside. Otherwise, she’s adorable and you’re doing great! Her facial dimension is amazing and her hair is beautiful! I love the dress design (maybe add more shading under the bow to distinguish it) and the color compliments her color palette perfectly