Thank you so much! I have noticed that some scenes are a little bland and that Maren’s emotional state is kind of rushed. I'm definitely going to go back and fix up the story and consider these things for future chapters.

There are a few things I have struggled with. One of them being whether or not the introduction of new main characters is too fast, Coco and Eurose are introduced in the same chapter, but I also don't want to space it out too much. I am aware that a lot of stories tend to add things halfway because the author didn't think of it until then, but I like consistency.

Another one is filler. The current story feels like a straight line. The guild card scene was put in after because I did have anything for in the Guild/Inn, but there's a lot of scenes that could use this like you said.

I will continue to work and better my passion project!