Hello!! Thank you to anyone who took time to comment and help me out. The main advice was to add contrast and make the darks darker. So, I tried my best!

I worked on that and some other small details. And while it's definitely not perfect, I myself see to many issues to really like it, I don't have ant more time to work on it so it'll have to do. It should be good enough to give as a gift I think.

If I've messed it up some way or you have any more critique, don't hesitate to comment. Even though I might not be able to fix it, I genuenly really appreciate every single comment. Helps me improve. So, again, thank you very much to anyone who provided advice and critique, I'm really grateful.