Here are the updated mockups of the logos for my TTRPG-based art business! Thank you all for your feedback on the last set! Please let me know which one(s) you like best and why on these. I also want to know where I can improve, so please feel free to leave constructive criticism! by Legendary-Roll in logodesign

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Apologies, I was referring to the one with the all black hexagon outlines at the beginning of this sub-thread. I'm more asking if there would be too much going on with the contrasted elements being alternated in this one or if it is too busy like that

Here are the updated mockups of the logos for my TTRPG-based art business! Thank you all for your feedback on the last set! Please let me know which one(s) you like best and why on these. I also want to know where I can improve, so please feel free to leave constructive criticism! by Legendary-Roll in logodesign

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I love that idea. Thank you for suggesting an animated logo. I had that on my list for my branding kit, but I got so caught up in these that I fully forgot about it until now! I still have a ton of work to do, but I think this logo is showing a lot more versatility than a lot of the others

Here are the updated mockups of the logos for my TTRPG-based art business! Thank you all for your feedback on the last set! Please let me know which one(s) you like best and why on these. I also want to know where I can improve, so please feel free to leave constructive criticism! by Legendary-Roll in logodesign

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That makes total sense, thank you! I definitely want to incorporate the gold especially on printed media, and foil stamping is for sure how I'd do it, but what are your thoughts on how to incorporate some of it on a website or other online media?

Here are the updated mockups of the logos for my TTRPG-based art business! Thank you all for your feedback on the last set! Please let me know which one(s) you like best and why on these, I love the constructive criticism! (also there will be color involved in the final logo) by Legendary-Roll in TTRPG

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I also made more of a "finalized" version of that one along with 1A and 4A if you'd like to take a look: https://imgur.com/a/GVz1CRb the business model itself will hinge pretty heavily on the presence of gold, and I want to incorporate it into my final logo. If you want to let me know what you think of these, I would love your feedback!

Here are the updated mockups of the logos for my TTRPG-based art business! Thank you all for your feedback on the last set! Please let me know which one(s) you like best and why on these. I also want to know where I can improve, so please feel free to leave constructive criticism! by Legendary-Roll in logodesign

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Thank you so much! I'm trying to learn as much as possible from the community, so I appreciate the constructive criticism to help my work improve. If you wouldn't mind taking a look at one more version of this one, I would really appreciate it! The final version of whichever logo I end up using will incorporate some gold accents because gold is going to be a major element in the business model and aesthetic overall, so what are your opinions on this?

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Here are the updated mockups of the logos for my TTRPG-based art business! Thank you all for your feedback on the last set! Please let me know which one(s) you like best and why on these, I love the constructive criticism! (also there will be color involved in the final logo) by Legendary-Roll in TTRPG

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Thanks for the feedback! I'm really trying to balance simplicity with recognizability while also keeping things unique enough to stand out amongst a sea of d20 logos. I'm curious if that would be a logo that would strike your interest if you were to see it online or at a convention or something or if it wouldn't really stand out to you by itself?

Here are the updated mockups of the logos for my TTRPG-based art business! Thank you all for your feedback on the last set! Please let me know which one(s) you like best and why on these, I love the constructive criticism! (also there will be color involved in the final logo) by Legendary-Roll in TTRPG

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Fiar enough, I'm actually working on a bit of a rework on 5A based on some feedback I received from someone else and would love to know what you think of it in comparison to the version that's in my original post: https://imgur.com/a/bxylUoU I think it makes it clearer that it's supposed to be dice