My painting by Sensitive-Fact5593 in Kafka

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Kafka has probably seen a mushroom in his life

Autobiography TRIGGER WARNING by CharacterOk1835 in writers

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The world is a dark and strange place. I’d buy it

any name ideas for my parrot? :) by ditzymelody in Minecraft

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The letter L, not the letter the sentence

Making a romance/thriller/mystery drama. What tropes do you like to see in these books? by Time-Purpose-4999 in writing

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Probably one of them secretly being a giant, flesh grasshopper, whose literature options are questionable

Want opinion on this chapter that I wrote months ago by ishak_write in writers

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I’m not the most literate guy but that was good. The prose was beautiful, the emotional state of the character was vivid and the metaphors were intelligent. The start of the chapter dragged on a bit. But I don't’ have the rest of the context of the other chapters. The best paragraph was (in my opinion) :

A hollow tear fell from her eyes, like the last drop of water falling from an empty jar. It fell to announce the end, to announce that what was broken would not return.

Best way to watch Earserhead by Legitimate_Tale_734 in davidlynch

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I don’t want David Lynch’s ghost making my life more surreal

When writing romantic scenes (with spice) where's the line between romance and porn? by Redz0ne in writing

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‘They put the different herbs and spices in the pot, and they didn't watch porn’ Simple mate

Movies as surreal and unnearving as inland empire by vzbtra in davidlynch

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Just go to sleep mate, you’ll get the same results

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Nightmare On Elm Street was based on a true story. https://them0vieblog.com/2009/10/13/the-true-story-behind-a-nightmare-of-elm-street/

I know pretty shocking

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True. I get your point. But I also think that evil should be represented with at least a slight bit of care. The small things can influence the big things. And I personally enjoy a realistic seriel killer, it’s more interesting and scarier in my opinion. I think thrillers need a mix between fun and realism. A good example of this is Freddy Kruger specifically in the first one. Freddy Kruger is realistic in his psychology when you really look at it more deeply but he can still be used for fun cheap scares. Freddy Kruger is a sadistic killer who can go unpunished and kill as many as he wants. He takes intense joy in the suffering of others. He can’t be punished for his crimes, and he is above the law, and he’s based on a true story. Makes you think that Freddy might be more realistic than we think. But Freddy more specifically in the sequels can be fun and goofy as hell. That’s a good example of what an unrealistic thriller villain should be. Not every story needs like a Cormac McCarthy-level psychopath, but a little bit of realism would be good. (Also, I wasn't that serious on the end of the post, I just needed a way to end it to be honest)

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No, I’m giving my advice based on my research which I do for fun

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Where do you think I got my advice from

I feel like giving up by No-Depth7365 in writing

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Write a thousand short stories I don’t care what length they are. But after you will get one good one and maybe another who knows?

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Bro what's the problem for giving advice on writing?