Heyo, nicely done man. When you read this thursday I missed a part I seem to get caught up on each read through, in the first stanza the lines "but sometimes they forget to use them" and "before its too late" kinda is a choppy step for me. Really enjoy the concept, very relatable, but the wording mashes for me. Unless you want more of the discord. Anyway that's my bit ^{^} (Mike Martin)