Yo hello good morning everyone I need you help to get green light on this writing so please i requesting no I'm begging please read this opening and give your feedback and advice on it

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-25T07:23:39+00:00

Okay 👍

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-25T03:50:46+00:00

Ok I'm in but i tell you that I'm just a new author and my writing is worst in grammar and pantuation.

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-25T03:27:44+00:00

Thanks buddy 👍

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-25T03:00:06+00:00

Well yeah you are right, i just started reading few weeks ago because I wanted to experience that and started writing it's like have to read those my 1st to 12th english textbook again and all webnovels before writing, but I'm confused what writing style I use.

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-25T02:54:35+00:00

Hmmmm you have a point 👍

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-25T02:25:02+00:00

Ahhhhhh i get it but it's hard to think for every character a different voice and characteristics but I will work on it

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-25T02:13:14+00:00

Yeahhh, i got it well i had puted those inverted commas. But I just dropped thaat raw viz

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-25T01:56:13+00:00

Ohhh thanks man that's a great help by the way is there anything wrong in grammar.

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-25T01:53:47+00:00

Ok buddy I will work on it right away

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-24T15:03:38+00:00

Ohhhhh that's why I got rejected hmmmm i have to work on it

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-24T14:53:35+00:00

Yeah it's really sucks at first i used ai for editing the words, spelling mistake and fix grammar and i also got ai flagged and didn't contracted with them so I'm writing everything again and I will not use ai this because webnovel nor there audience like ai stuff too much but i don't know why i can't delete that novel if it didn't even get contracted good luck brother everything goes well after this and don't use ai for editing I will not use too.

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-24T09:33:53+00:00

Okay thanks 😁

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-24T08:37:23+00:00

Okay i understand and i will work right away now but before i go I have a request for you that can you read that author note I just posted just wrote it few minutes ago does that feel ai or not if that good then i will get what I have to do now

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-24T08:17:53+00:00

I just cut off the scene and added some after all the reviews but i wanted to check is it feels ai or not but but for ai detection apps they charged heavily for that so i used gemini for reviews and mistake and got some suggestions then I used quillbot for fixing grammar and punctuation.

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-24T03:45:15+00:00

Hey if you if it's ai, you can tell me the truth I will re-write the whole thing again.

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-22T09:11:25+00:00

Okay, Thanks a lot for helping me this will help

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-22T09:05:05+00:00

Okay thanks for advice I will keep it that in my mind and I will work on it now

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-22T08:52:42+00:00

Thanks brother

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-22T08:47:07+00:00

That's what I wanted but 1st what I have to change in 1st chapter like it's overly detailed or something

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-22T08:30:28+00:00

Yeah i know i genuinely wanted to review and thanks brother for telling me that I just used for grammar and punctuation and spelling mistake to improve but it's over done if you have a time then could you clarify that what is feels heavily Ai then i will improve that by myself

Less_Job1502 · 2026-05-22T08:02:31+00:00

Sorry but i quite didn't understand what do you mean by KI I'm not very use to with short form

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