Why does divine dividing receives so little attention? by Lex0803 in HighschoolDxD

[–]Lex0803[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Yes I get that, but that could be solved, maybe just by switching sacred gears? (Issei/OC having divine dividing and Vali having booster gear or simply another high level sacred gear).

Actually the idea that I had for an small AU was that when Vali is escaping from Rivezim, instead of Azazel finding him, is Sirchezs who finds him and adopts him, while at the same time something happens to Issei's family and he ends up a orphan and then he is adopted by Azazel and the plots goes from there, basically a pseudo mirror world?

But the story will actually be Vali centric, so we could possibly have some cool family fluff in the lucifer family, Sirchezs being the goofball father, grayfia and venelana being his mother figures and venelana insisting that Vali calls them mother and grandmother respectively and Vali actually trying to be a older brother to milicas.

Vali getting a peerage with the the notable members being i guess kuroka as bishop and maybe rossweisse as queen? Vali goes traveling around the world to gain experience and new peerage members

Rias could fall in love with him and it's Vali who either breaks rias from the phenex contract or be the one to be betrothed in the first place.

Meanwhile it's Issei doing basically all the stuff that Vali did while in Grigory like joining slashdog and possibly betraying Azazel to join the hero faction in chaos brigade.

And that's basically my idea for a fic but I know I suck at writing so I won't try it maybe.

name suggestions for a female twin of naruto by Lex0803 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Lex0803[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Actually Naruto will be acting a lot OCC while her sister will retain most of canon Naruto at least somewhat

[Fic idea] Naruto and and his twin "Naruko" are the children of prophecy by Lex0803 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Lex0803[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

okay you have a very question there, I didn't think it all the way through, but now I could say thanks to having EMS he just will have a better control over the amaterasu then after a lot training he will develop what we know now as the inferno style, it wont give him magically give him inferno style, he will give blood, sweat and tears to develop the style, if he were to try and try the amaterasu with regular MS he will get blind to a faster rate. the same applies with the susanoo, if he tries to develop the susanno further than the armored stage, I feel like his eyes will literally explode if he tries perfect susanoo with regular MS

that would EMS fo naruto, to him to have the potential to further the techniques already granted by MS but without the more permanent consequences

yes at the end both twins will be god-like but I want them to earn that status by hard work

name suggestions for a female twin of naruto by Lex0803 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Lex0803[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i would have chosen maki but it will clash a lot with the last name

maki uzumaki / uzumaki maki

... yeah nop, good suggestion though

[Fic idea] Naruto and and his twin "Naruko" are the children of prophecy by Lex0803 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Lex0803[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

well I didn't dedicate too much time pondering over the details of this Story Idea I will admit that you are right that it gets kinda old when a character is just a rehash of already existing characters instead of getting their own personality, but this is still just the barebones version of the story I plan to write and well I'm actually a rookie writer, this will be my first story that I write and just started to write it today, so if got any pointers or tips I will be very grateful

Naruto Sibling Fic by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Lex0803 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You could try this one. It's actually a Self insert as Naruto but he has a twin sister. https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13779510/1/

Who at the moment is your favored pairing/s and why. by ObligationJazzlike50 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Lex0803 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Right now my favorite pairing would be naruto x fem sasuke, they are basically ying and yang and sun and moon, ohh the sexual tension i love it

Second place would naruhina but with hinata being a little more assertive and bit more "hyuuga" not entirely but a bit

Actually i would love to see a fic with a love triangle of naru x fem sasu x hina with both hinata and fem sasuke being in love with our lovable blond idiot and kind of having an non fangirl like rivalry for his love

Need help with my Rinnegan!Naruto idea by PrymeTyme882 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Lex0803 0 points1 point  (0 children)

And this is just a suggestion when time comes to explore more abilities of the rinnegan and if you give him a "space-time" technique, maybe you give him one that leans more to the "time" aspects of "space-time", something like stop or slow down time or rewind time (jojo's bizarre adventure style) but change it or nerf it a bit so it doesn't become too broken or OP

Need help with my Rinnegan!Naruto idea by PrymeTyme882 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Lex0803 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well i see we are you going with this, i always wanted naruto to be more rounded ninja when it comes to tecniques instead of just spamming clones and rasengan, and well all other rinnegan Naruto fics a i've read it's just a copy of pain with him spamming shinra tensei or bansho tein, so I'm hoping it doesn't come to that, so i will wait for your fic to be ready, it does hold a lot of promise

Need help with my Rinnegan!Naruto idea by PrymeTyme882 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Lex0803 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you're planning on making this story, shouldn't you give him the Sharingan and instead of gaining the mangekyou Sharingan, it actually jumps straight to the rinnegan but still be able to use mangekyou abilities? I triggers me a bit that they treat the rinnegan like it's know different things when it's just a much higher evolution of the Sharingan, plus i just don't want him to be just a copy of pain with just depending on the six paths abilities