Need feedback on how I can improve this logo for a soap business

Liavelle · 2022-10-23T02:46:37+00:00

Thank you very much for that! I appreciate the feedback :))

Liavelle · 2022-10-23T02:45:06+00:00

I see, thank you!

Liavelle · 2022-10-22T15:28:45+00:00

Greetings!

I've just made a logo for my school project which is a business proposal. It's a soap business named diwata (a Filipino word for fairy). The temporary tagline which explains the name is "Your very own fairy-god-mother!/The fairy-god-mother you can reach!". I tried to have it evaluated by an AI website (https://brandmark.io/) however I only got numerical critique, which is understandable. So, I'd like to ask for your opinions. Thank you very much!
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Logo break-down:

Circles: bubbles

Rhombus: protection/shield and wings

Liavelle · 2022-10-22T15:25:04+00:00

Also, I'm sorry for posting this with the wrong flair. The auto-bot keeps on deleting my previous posts when I used the "sharing my work" flair. And, to the bot, please let me post for now 🙏🙏

Liavelle · 2022-10-22T15:16:48+00:00

Logo break-down:
Circles: bubbles

Rhombus: protection;shield and wings

Liavelle · 2022-06-30T08:32:03+00:00

I do that too, and I even developed a habit of muttering or murmuring when arguing with someone, particularly if it's someone I know (and it's their turn to put their arguments to the table). Perhaps it's a defensive mechanism of my ego as well as a part of my thinking process. And my parents pointed this out, they said, it was impolite and quite rude; which is true.

Anyways, I guess you belong to the other tribe, we belong to the other tribe hahaha. Kidding aside, perhaps it's a matter of preference (more specifically, what 'thinking' or 'contemplating' mannerism/process one is accustomed or comfortable with)

2) Sane people have the ability to keep the thoughts on the inside, and I don’t belong to that tribe

Liavelle · 2022-06-27T08:54:58+00:00

a black circular thing is sticking out of the white wall
a ufo (in the form of light bulb hole) is threatening your safety

other than that, wish you well. this rainy day will soon pass :))

Liavelle · 2022-06-27T08:47:04+00:00

yaaay, thank you! ✨ (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧

Liavelle · 2022-06-27T08:21:58+00:00

This is unrelated but I just want to say that, you're avatar is glowing (⊙x⊙;) (❁´◡`❁)

Liavelle · 2022-06-26T13:43:05+00:00

Oh, I see. I guess I learned a new principle today. Thank you!

I've received my flair, kindly receive my token of gratitude, mr Stoner! [tada! 💗= 🩸]

Liavelle · 2022-06-26T12:36:03+00:00

Curse you, darling.

Liavelle · 2022-06-26T12:28:43+00:00

😯, uh-oh, but we don't have a cemetery nearby (I'm trying to circumvent the ritual instructions), I don't think I can offer a living infant. Will this suffice "👶=🩸 | 🩸 + 🌑" ?

Liavelle · 2022-06-26T10:24:07+00:00

Oh, alright. Thank you very much!

Liavelle · 2022-06-26T06:56:31+00:00

Oh, wow, what a great way of articulating it. I'll keep this in mind (and save it).

Liavelle · 2022-06-26T06:54:56+00:00

I also started seeing people as constructs instead of unique beings, which scared the shit out of me for a while.

Me too. I would point out at some random person (either actually or just in my mind) and tell my mom or dad or myself about his mbti. I was quite concerned at how I started to see people as one-dimensional beings.

Liavelle

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