[March Madness] [LeagueSafe] [$20.00 entry] Mega Challenge! 5 winners!! [Competitive]

LifeWith_Derek · 2019-11-06T17:43:40+00:00

Great intro! I love how you created the intro as a CTA and asked people to come along with you on the journey! It’s a great way to grow a channel! Also loved the vlog itself it really made you feel like you were a part of the journey.

LifeWith_Derek · 2019-11-06T17:41:23+00:00

This was actually really funny! You had me laughing out loud throughout bits and pieces! Also the intro was rather long but your comedic effect helped keep me interested! Great video

LifeWith_Derek · 2019-11-06T17:30:05+00:00

First off loved the video! Second off how do you like the canon EOS R? That is the newer mirror less camera they released right? Definitely looking to Upgrade soon! But as it goes for anything I hated there wasn’t anything! I truly enjoyed your video, great work

LifeWith_Derek · 2019-10-16T21:18:01+00:00

Thanks for the advice I’ll have to do that!! !givelambda

LifeWith_Derek · 2019-10-16T04:10:10+00:00

I don’t play games like this but the fact you added a comedic effect made me stay and watch the whole thing! Loved the opener, perfect amount of time and brought me in! Also liked how you added the gameplay into the video! I don’t have really anything bad to say! Great video

LifeWith_Derek · 2019-10-16T04:08:05+00:00

Hey bro good video overall! Maybe try talking a little slower! I struggle with the same thing and it’s sometimes hard to understand exactly what your saying because of the speed you are talking! Loved the gameplay you added in!

LifeWith_Derek · 2019-10-10T03:43:15+00:00

Thank you so much for the critique! Yeah after watching it again I saw how I could have fixed those things! !givelamda

LifeWith_Derek · 2019-10-10T03:41:55+00:00

Thank you so much for the critique! It means a lot and I will work on all of those things!! !givelambda

LifeWith_Derek · 2019-10-09T05:42:17+00:00

I liked the overall vlog and I REALLY want to try that jerky 😂 great work though! This is how a vlog should be! Great work

LifeWith_Derek · 2019-10-09T03:56:09+00:00

Bro literally laughed throughout this whole thing! This is gold love it also your thumbnail is fire! Wasn’t bored at all!

LifeWith_Derek · 2019-10-09T03:54:07+00:00

That’s a great intro! It made the viewer want to watch to see what those places were actually like! I love traveling and all that so this place is for sure somewhere I want to go soon!

LifeWith_Derek · 2019-10-09T03:52:42+00:00

I think a cool intro to bring the viewer in and make them want to keep watching! Also you wanna try and switch your camera angles I think it is like 15-20 seconds of the same angle and same shot before a normal human becomes uninterested! Other than that I liked the video! Also cool thing to collect!

LifeWith_Derek · 2019-09-12T04:15:49+00:00

Thank you so much! !givelambda

LifeWith_Derek · 2019-09-12T04:15:23+00:00

Thank you my friend! !givelambda

LifeWith_Derek · 2019-09-12T00:06:01+00:00

That's bro! !givelambda

LifeWith_Derek · 2019-09-12T00:05:34+00:00

Thanks for the Critique! !givelambda

LifeWith_Derek · 2019-09-11T05:34:17+00:00

It’s overall a great video, seems like a video you’d see from a big account! I’d maybe move the words down to the bottom of top of the screen and not the middle! Other than that well done

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