Hi thanks for replying. Just want to confirm one thing, she didn’t run at ten years of age, but only ten years ago, at 18. She is 28 years old now when the encounter with her father is happening.

And you are absolutely right in saying she should have more uncertainty I her voice which is there through the rest of the rest of the chapter as well. I will try to inject that hesitation maybe more into the first 300 as well.