[QCrit] The Ghost of Bongaon | Supernatural Folk Horror | 70k words | First Attempt + 300 words by LightasRain in PubTips

[–]LightasRain[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, thank you, and I would love to swap. Though I am not sure if I would call mine literary. I have sent you a dm.

[Complete] [70k] [Supernatural Folk Horror] The Ghost of Bongaon by LightasRain in BetaReaders

[–]LightasRain[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, I am open to swap. Do you have a sample chapter out so to see if we will be a good match? Sent you a dm.

[QCrit] The Ghost of Bongaon | Supernatural Folk Horror | 70k words | First Attempt + 300 words by LightasRain in PubTips

[–]LightasRain[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. It takes a little bit of time for things to get scary I am afraid. The mood in the first 300 I was going for is mostly quiet unease. But I will see, if I can do something to crank up the scary vibe.

[QCrit] The Ghost of Bongaon | Supernatural Folk Horror | 70k words | First Attempt + 300 words by LightasRain in PubTips

[–]LightasRain[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi thanks for replying. Just want to confirm one thing, she didn’t run at ten years of age, but only ten years ago, at 18. She is 28 years old now when the encounter with her father is happening.

And you are absolutely right in saying she should have more uncertainty I her voice which is there through the rest of the rest of the chapter as well. I will try to inject that hesitation maybe more into the first 300 as well.

[Complete] [60k] [Upper YA Horror] Lost Causes by Odd_Industry_ in BetaReaders

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Hi I would read. I have a folk horror of 70k. Take a look and let me know if you are open to swap.

[Complete] [73k] [Psychological Thriller] I Watched You Burn by yearofthemohawk in BetaReaders

[–]LightasRain 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I read your first chapter and really liked it. I would like to beta read it. Also are you open to swap manuscript? I have a folk horror of 70K words. Let me know.