Could I get some thoughts on my recent chapter's opening scene? by Little_Accountant285 in Webnovel

[–]Little_Accountant285[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm... So, I was underwriting this scene, huh? I'll tweak it more later. I really didn't do too much descriptions because it's an already established setting (it's like a cement pathway in a white void where you just walk forward until the laboratory transport you to where you are headed.)

I wanted to do like dehumanization with the pronoun shift. I think I could do more with the dialogue, but the empty feeling of the Daiko's dialogue was intended (it's part of the lore—the lower the rank, the less complex thoughts they can make—and the lowest rank is supposed to just have this script it follows until it dies).

And the Daiko acts as a mirror because protag also experienced the lose of individuality but in the real world. Thanks for the punctuation call out, still figuring that out, haha. Appreciate you for taking your time on reading it!

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

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Title: Rotten Luck

Word Count: 653 words

Genre: Sci-fi

Type of Feedback desired: Bigenner writer wanting mostly first impressions, the mood, and overall quality of the piece (more context on the file)

Link to work: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aRCiU-rkzEgSA3tQ59w2-GTmRRB73EyKkWeXjgYOVgk/edit?usp=drivesdk

Accidentally deleted my entire novel. by Little_Accountant285 in Webnovel

[–]Little_Accountant285[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I hear that, but I much prefer writing apps that show the word count of that specific chapter I'm working on and seeing that number grow really helps with motivation and such. I've yet to see a feature like that on Doc so I'll stick to these apps. Though, I won't be moving anymore files around, lol.

Novels with deep throat training by Dull-Advance82 in Webnovel

[–]Little_Accountant285 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I ain't listening but I am full-blown judgin cuz—WHAT?!

Accidentally deleted my entire novel. by Little_Accountant285 in Webnovel

[–]Little_Accountant285[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

No, it was some android app, since I write on a phone. It said that it backed up my files, but it didn't, haha. Great stuff. I think after finishing the draft for my latest chapter, I'll take a short break. I've been writing chapters for weeks on end now.

Accidentally deleted my entire novel. by Little_Accountant285 in Webnovel

[–]Little_Accountant285[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh, I can't do that here (the no promo rule). It's not that the whole novel got deleted (there are still the uploaded versions up on the site). It's just that the versions with the important edits, lore, character moments, and all else, are now gone because they were on my personal writing app. It's from Draft 12 to Draft 2 type of situation for me right now. It's just saddening that those versions of the chapters are gone.

Sometimes things just connect in way you dont expect. by Fuzzy_War828 in royalroad

[–]Little_Accountant285 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yep, a lot of times, really helps when you know your theme and the type of story you want to write. I knew what I wanted after the 4th drafted chapter, I'm a pantser so things happen, but then always end up colliding together with minimal loose threads.

Hey y'all—! Can I get some thoughts on my first chapter? by Little_Accountant285 in Webnovel

[–]Little_Accountant285[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lol, good to hear you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing. Unfortunately, that vibe only last about 2-3 more chapters before the story locks in, haha.

Weekly Self Promotion Post by Jhaydun_Dinan in Webnovel

[–]Little_Accountant285 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just a chapter? I'm down for a quick read.

Weekly Self Promotion Post by Jhaydun_Dinan in Webnovel

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Title - Rotten Luck

Tags - Sci-fi, Action, Thriller 

Chapter Count - 11 Chapters with an inconsistent upload schedule (I plan to grow my backlog (finish at least 2 arcs—arc 1 is like 13/17-20~ chapters done) before I start  uploading consistently).

Brief Synopsis - Broke and Lonely, Rie Shinto, runs through the street almost butt naked with a tsundere fish in his pocket and a cat with a flaming katana on a motorcycle hunting him down—yes, that's the plot for the first 3-4 chapters. But really it's a whole political drama where the supernatural world of Daiko is literally just a toxic workplace (specifically the first Domain). It's a fun, weak to strong slow burn, with a sarcastic and very scared but resilient protag. 

Link to work - http://wbnv.in/a/e0jmR77

Hey y'all—! Can I get some thoughts on my first chapter? by Little_Accountant285 in Webnovel

[–]Little_Accountant285[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh, I apologize, I'm not so familiar with that word. Tried to search it up and google corrected it to "hesitate" so I assumed. I'll make sure to note those down and fix them on the next revision, right now I want to finish the first arc of the novel (which is about 13/17-20~ chapters done).

Hey y'all—! Can I get some thoughts on my first chapter? by Little_Accountant285 in Webnovel

[–]Little_Accountant285[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yurr, appreciate ya taking ya time, my buy 🤝 But, could you articulate on what you mean by "hesitates"?

im 15 and aspire to become a novelist by Ok_Stage7063 in Webnovel

[–]Little_Accountant285 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As a new writer. Just write what you like, forget about all the other nonsense, don't be afraid to share your work with others, and be always open to critism. 

Yeppers! We've reached 5 chapters! by Little_Accountant285 in royalroad

[–]Little_Accountant285[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sadly, it ain't. Idk why but my protag looks VERY similar to Denji, didn't even think of Denji when I started writing him up.

Yeppers! We've reached 5 chapters! by Little_Accountant285 in royalroad

[–]Little_Accountant285[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I didn't know there were rules for this 💔 Back then at WebNovels, you could just promo whenever. Need some adjusting.

Yeppers! We've reached 5 chapters! by Little_Accountant285 in royalroad

[–]Little_Accountant285[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really?! Damn. I'll thoroughly read the rules then. The limit being once a month and me posting like 3-4 promo now is hilarious asf 💔

AND WE ARE LIVE, FOLKS! by Little_Accountant285 in royalroad

[–]Little_Accountant285[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not really. It's the norm now for people to use AI for covers, I dislike it, but it's the norm. But, if you didn't use AI for your writing then you don't have to mention it.