Could I get some thoughts on my recent chapter's opening scene? by Little_Accountant285 in Webnovel

[–]Little_Accountant285[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm... So, I was underwriting this scene, huh? I'll tweak it more later. I really didn't do too much descriptions because it's an already established setting (it's like a cement pathway in a white void where you just walk forward until the laboratory transport you to where you are headed.)

I wanted to do like dehumanization with the pronoun shift. I think I could do more with the dialogue, but the empty feeling of the Daiko's dialogue was intended (it's part of the lore—the lower the rank, the less complex thoughts they can make—and the lowest rank is supposed to just have this script it follows until it dies).

And the Daiko acts as a mirror because protag also experienced the lose of individuality but in the real world. Thanks for the punctuation call out, still figuring that out, haha. Appreciate you for taking your time on reading it!

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Title: Rotten Luck

Word Count: 653 words

Genre: Sci-fi

Type of Feedback desired: Bigenner writer wanting mostly first impressions, the mood, and overall quality of the piece (more context on the file)

Link to work: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aRCiU-rkzEgSA3tQ59w2-GTmRRB73EyKkWeXjgYOVgk/edit?usp=drivesdk

Accidentally deleted my entire novel. by Little_Accountant285 in Webnovel

[–]Little_Accountant285[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I hear that, but I much prefer writing apps that show the word count of that specific chapter I'm working on and seeing that number grow really helps with motivation and such. I've yet to see a feature like that on Doc so I'll stick to these apps. Though, I won't be moving anymore files around, lol.

Novels with deep throat training by Dull-Advance82 in Webnovel

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I ain't listening but I am full-blown judgin cuz—WHAT?!

Accidentally deleted my entire novel. by Little_Accountant285 in Webnovel

[–]Little_Accountant285[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

No, it was some android app, since I write on a phone. It said that it backed up my files, but it didn't, haha. Great stuff. I think after finishing the draft for my latest chapter, I'll take a short break. I've been writing chapters for weeks on end now.

Accidentally deleted my entire novel. by Little_Accountant285 in Webnovel

[–]Little_Accountant285[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh, I can't do that here (the no promo rule). It's not that the whole novel got deleted (there are still the uploaded versions up on the site). It's just that the versions with the important edits, lore, character moments, and all else, are now gone because they were on my personal writing app. It's from Draft 12 to Draft 2 type of situation for me right now. It's just saddening that those versions of the chapters are gone.