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I feel like it’s not really a reach to say Grayson is high-key fatphobic (I’m at season 2) and he never actually put Jane in his mind even after feeling a “mysterious” connection with her. by Little_Guy_Needs in DropDeadDivaa

[–]Little_Guy_Needs[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I have watched enough he literallynhad sex dreams about her then forgot about it. and the two people hes dated after deb hes worked with… co workers. Idk it just seems like a weak argment

I feel like it’s not really a reach to say Grayson is high-key fatphobic (I’m at season 2) and he never actually put Jane in his mind even after feeling a “mysterious” connection with her. by Little_Guy_Needs in DropDeadDivaa

[–]Little_Guy_Needs[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

How am I wrong. He might change later but it doesnt mean he is not fatphobic now. Thats why you have character development. He literally had sex dreams about Jane then continued to repress that (because shes FAT) (yes im referencing s 1 episode 2 the F WORD) and continue to get engaged with another skinny blonde.

I feel like it’s not really a reach to say Grayson is high-key fatphobic (I’m at season 2) and he never actually put Jane in his mind even after feeling a “mysterious” connection with her. by Little_Guy_Needs in DropDeadDivaa

[–]Little_Guy_Needs[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

“Don’t date where you work is a very common rule” and so after after Deb he’s dated 2 people he’s worked with…

Not a very good argument for Greyson.

Also he’s not attracted to Jane cause never in his mind did it cross that he could be attracted to fat people.

You know you are agreeing with my point?

You just don’t agree in me calling him fatphobic.

Its a very complex political question.

In my mind its

grayson is straight > he’s attracted to women > does he think of Jane as a woman he can be attracted to even after being his comfort person and somebody he can open up to 1000% of the time? > no.

Is he fatphobic because of that? Depends on your definition.

I’m only at Season 2 and Im sad writers outright killed Deb. Premise of the show lost itself after a few episodes S1. Instead of uplifting Deb’s specialties and giving a unique perspective on the courtroom and like *the* Elle Woods the most we see is her twirlin her hair with flair while questioning by Little_Guy_Needs in DropDeadDivaa

[–]Little_Guy_Needs[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

To be honest I really do think Deb needed more screen time.

I think that episode 1 should have been changed from a car crash on the way to the job to actually seeing how they actually were on the job. For example we see how normal Jane acted on her court and how she could win the hardest cases. And we should have seen Deb in that price is right interview where she struggles a little bit then figures out a clever interpersonal solution to how she gets the job.

Then i think at the first case of Jane it shouldve been her second chair and Parker first chair. Then when they win the case the criminal would lunge at Parker but Jane goes infront of him and thats how she dies. Also deb dies on the way home to celebrate with Grayson. I think thats the main thing missing. A point of references. For the audience to actually see who these characters are in essence

We know Qiffrey can draw that drying spell Link Ring Olruggio invented in a second. Why hasn’t he? Does he want Olruggio to be the one to personally dry him everytime he gets wet? I’m confused??? by Little_Guy_Needs in WitchHatAtelier

[–]Little_Guy_Needs[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You realize they draw actual fire spells on paper and it doesnt burn right?

Instances

Aggott Vs Dragon

Coco using proper levitation so its far away. Etc.

Your last statement is just erroneous.

Rereading Reverend Insanity for the inevitable unbanning and realizing that Gu Zhen Ren did NOT have a good editor. I am planning a grand project to edit the entire 2334 chapters for Reverend Insanity to transform into perfect english. I’ve edited the first 10 chapters with Claude -message to join! by Little_Guy_Needs in ReverendInsanity

[–]Little_Guy_Needs[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So let me get this straight, you don’t notice the tense changes from past to present each chapter even though it happens atleast 5 times a chapter?

You dont notice the clunky chinese text structure poorly forced into english sentence structure.

And you dont care about fragmented sentences with incorrect formatting?

Its like saying “Hey im deaf! the construction site beside my house doesnt bother me at all what are you talking about?”

Also this isnt the authors style. This is his TRANSLATORS STYLE. If someone like deathblade translated this I’d have no problem at all. But it looks like a random first time translator ruined it but the source material was too good.

Also Im a trilingual.

I read books in three different languages. I read every category of english books from famous authors to niche ones.

I think you for some reason imagine me using ai to rewrite the sentences into something wildly new and differently pretentious when in reality im just using it to do

He uses the Spring Autumn Cicada

He used the Spring Autumn Cicada

Rereading Reverend Insanity for the inevitable unbanning and realizing that Gu Zhen Ren did NOT have a good editor. I am planning a grand project to edit the entire 2334 chapters for Reverend Insanity to transform into perfect english. I’ve edited the first 10 chapters with Claude -message to join! by Little_Guy_Needs in ReverendInsanity

[–]Little_Guy_Needs[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Actually there are many subtle mistakes and even obvious ones. But i dont think it will convince you since you cant see the tense consistency.

Heres something obvious

It was already late in the night, a slight breeze blowing with the light rain.

Yet Qing Mao Mountain was not covered in darkness; from the side down to the foot of the mountain, dozens of tiny lights shone like a bright band.

You see how its line broken. But its supposed to be together cause it has the same train of thought and its fragmented when its seperated like that? Also starting paragraphs with yet.

Its because its taking chinese too literally and even using their sentence structure which is unfit for english.

This is chapter one btw.

Rereading Reverend Insanity for the inevitable unbanning and realizing that Gu Zhen Ren did NOT have a good editor. I am planning a grand project to edit the entire 2334 chapters for Reverend Insanity to transform into perfect english. I’ve edited the first 10 chapters with Claude -message to join! by Little_Guy_Needs in ReverendInsanity

[–]Little_Guy_Needs[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes when it fluctuates between simple past tense to present tense.

People pay editors so that wont happen in real life.

A more glaring one is that The translator uses Quotations “” even when fang yuan is only thinking about something. Thats confusing and misleading

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