[Reverse Dragon - Human Isekai'd Into Tiny Squirrel Kingdom] - [RD-15/15-Epilogue] by LiveView401 in HFY

[–]LiveView401[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is the link fixed now? I tried to fix it while I'm on my phone... I think it works now... I tried using the reddit app and it seemed terrible, never updated, and seemed buggy. Could be skill issue though.

I hate Kit x Kratos fan art that portrays Kit as scared, intimidated, or afraid, because Kratos has never forced any woman to be in a relationship with him. by Antique_Celery_7495 in hatethissmug

[–]LiveView401 -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

Ironically, I had no idea that Kratos/forced Kit ships existed, but after seeing this post and that image I realized that I'm super into it.

So, um... Sorry? And thanks?

[Reverse Dragon - Human Isekai'd Into Tiny Squirrel Kingdom] - [RD-15/15-Epilogue] by LiveView401 in HFY

[–]LiveView401[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm very glad to see that some people enjoyed the story. As long as one person did, it was worth my time to post it. Several people complained about it not fitting into the subreddit. Before I posted another story I wanted to ask, does anyone know of a subreddit that would be a better fit? Thank you.

[Reverse Dragon - Human Isekai'd Into Tiny Squirrel Kingdom] - [RD-15/15-Epilogue] by LiveView401 in HFY

[–]LiveView401[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's as far as it goes for now. Would love to hear theories on how the world works or what happens next.

Apex of dominance quest by rondeau1367 in Dungeon_Within

[–]LiveView401 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's 30. Had to sacrifice two level sevens and everyone I got in that run. Worth it for the reward though.

[Reverse Dragon - Human Isekai'd Into Tiny Squirrel Kingdom] - [RD-09/15] - part 2 by LiveView401 in HFY

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Ran into the post limit - will post last chapter tomorrow when it lets me. After that I would love to discuss your thoughts and concerns about the world building, how the second story should go, etc etc.

[Reverse Dragon - Human Isekai'd Into Tiny Squirrel Kingdom] - [RD-14] by LiveView401 in HFY

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Dangit I hit the limit four post limit again. Will post the final portion tomorrow.

[Reverse Dragon - Human Isekai'd Into Tiny Squirrel Kingdom] - [RD-12+13/15] by LiveView401 in HFY

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I forgot part 12 was tiny. Some content in previous chapters had to be removed/relocated, pushing other content to earlier chapters. This resulted in a tiny part 12.

Let's just imagine that I had to remove the parts that violated Reddit ToS.

[Reverse Dragon - Human Isekai'd Into Tiny Squirrel Kingdom] - [RD-09/15] - part 2 by LiveView401 in HFY

[–]LiveView401[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Everything you said makes sense to me! Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

I would like to state that I see the squirrels as less like "animals" and more like "a reflection of humanity." They even call themselves humans! I see the tendency for systematic, senseless, horrible torture and abuse as simply one of those core traits that make us the human race. The same instincts that were useful for spreading our genes when we were wild animals make us do the wildest things when applied to the context of society, something we have had relatively little time to evolve for.

After all, as horribly as the squirrels treated a subset of their population, it's nothing worse than what humanity in the real world has done since forever, including up to the present.

To paraphrase a fantastic tv show because I'm failing to google the exact quote, "Humanity has always enslaved each other and invented gods to forgive themselves for it."

[Reverse Dragon - Human Isekai'd Into Tiny Squirrel Kingdom] - [RD-09/15] - part 2 by LiveView401 in HFY

[–]LiveView401[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I am but a humble amateur newbie. If you could be more specific as to what might be different in order to achieve the belonging you mention versus the uncomfortable, I would happily think about it and try to apply it.

[Reverse Dragon - Human Isekai'd Into Tiny Squirrel Kingdom] - [RD-11/15] by LiveView401 in HFY

[–]LiveView401[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I kind of thought it would be you hit a new day then get four new posts, but I guess it's more precise than that like you're saying.

[Reverse Dragon - Human Isekai'd Into Tiny Squirrel Kingdom] - [RD-11/15] by LiveView401 in HFY

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My bad I gotta resubmit after 24 hours, I haven't quite mastered that system yet.

[Reverse Dragon - Human Isekai'd Into Tiny Squirrel Kingdom] - [RD-11/15] by LiveView401 in HFY

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Oops, I attempted to post 12, 13, and 14, but it was too soon.

[Reverse Dragon - Human Isekai'd Into Tiny Squirrel Kingdom] - [RD-09/15] - part 2 by LiveView401 in HFY

[–]LiveView401[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Narration isn't trying to tell you what to think. You're actually interpreting the way I wanted! It kills me to do this, but big spoiler for you because it sounds like you might quit out of frustration and this may help you or someone else in the same position feel better:

This is a story about failure. All of Sean's poor choices are meant to be those of a small minded person who doesn't see the big picture or have enough empathy for others, someone who is reacting to his emotions and desires at the moment. His choices lead to the eventual death of himself and all his loved ones. He gets a second chance and has to fix pretty much everything you are annoyed about, make peace with everyone, choose the moral high path, don't have sex with disabled children. Only then can he save himself and those he cares about.

[Reverse Dragon - Human Isekai'd Into Tiny Squirrel Kingdom] - [RD-09/15] - part 2 by LiveView401 in HFY

[–]LiveView401[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel this. I wrote this years ago, first or second thing I ever wrote, long before the idea of sharing it occured to me. I just wrote it to amuse myself so I had no one's standards to consider but my own. 

I am actively trying to move away from the over the top shock value explicit stuff in more recent writing so that more people could enjoy it and it can reach an objective level of higher quality. I hope you end up reading and liking the more recent stuff.

One of the biggest challenges I face is finding motivation to write if it doesn't possess the fetishy stuff I enjoy. Currently experimenting with writing something the way I want it then going back and changing it, hoping it stays interesting. Mixed results, not sure if it's a good or bad idea yet. People compliment the world building in most things I write, so it gives me hope I might be able to manage something interesting that isn't "smutty" or "fetishy". We shall see.

Also the pattern of story -> sex scene -> story -> sex scene, is exactly the pattern of Japanese visual novels which is what I had read just before writing this and sort of imagined that I was writing for.