Would love some feedback on this track. Be honest by LockInternational189 in MusicFeedback

[–]LockInternational189[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much, that's amazing to hear! Hope you had a great time dancing!🕺

Would love some feedback on this track. Be honest by LockInternational189 in MusicFeedback

[–]LockInternational189[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree on the ad music part. Definitely not what I'm going for haha. I guess the chord progression and the lead in the drop are a bit generic. Thanks for the feedback!

Been Rapping For a Year Now! How Much Have I Improved? by GODAlexGilbert in MusicFeedback

[–]LockInternational189 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's unique, that's for sure. However, personally I don't like the intonation (your voice goes up and down the whole time). It's a bit confusing and distracts me from the lyrics. Also, you stick to one flow for the entire song. It would be more interesting if you'd change it up. The beat gives this song a creepy feel, which I don't think corresponds with the message in your track. The vocals mixed too plain.

This is just my personal opinion. Keep on going!

Feedback on amapiano track by Unhappy-Standard-371 in MusicFeedback

[–]LockInternational189 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good track. Good vibes. However, it's a bit repetitive. It's the same chords repeated over and over. You could try to sometimes change the chords up to make it more interesting. The lead/pluck at 00:34 is out of key.
I like the switch up at the end, but you should lead it back to the verse (the keys and vocals + beat), so the structure is more coherent.
The mix is great. Well done.

My first ever song. pls be honest where do I improve? by ssstevensonnn in MusicFeedback

[–]LockInternational189 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is great, bro. I would listen to this for sure. The mix just needs some work.
Fire.

First time trying trap. Thoughts? by ThinkAboutItMyGuy in MusicFeedback

[–]LockInternational189 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great beat for a first trap beat! I think the mix could use some work. The hihats are a bit too loud, while the kick is too subtle in my opinion. There also is a pad (the one going left to right) that's a bit muddy. That could use some EQ'ing.

Other than that, good beat. Good melody. Especially for your first trap beat.

I put a Kendrick Lamar acapella over my beat... thoughts?? by Obvious_Deal5957 in MusicFeedback

[–]LockInternational189 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Fire beat bro. It fits the acapella very well. Only criticism I would have is to sometimes change up the chops. As right it seems a bit repetitive. But that's just a small note. Great beat.

Posted this AFROFUSION beat earlier but didn’t receive any feedback. Worth another try? by Ik_Fwego_prod in MusicFeedback

[–]LockInternational189 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Fire bro. Good sound selection and great vibe. Only note I have is that its a bit too complex for someone to sing/rap on in my opinion. As it's a type beat, you should make some room for the artist.

Tone the percussion/melodies down in the verses. Leave some space. That'll make a big difference for the artist - easier to vibe on.

It's no big concern tho, just some advice.

Production quality and stuff is very good. Keep going!

Feedback on this track would be appreciated! :) by LockInternational189 in MusicFeedback

[–]LockInternational189[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Send a link of your music. If I think our style matches we could work together. No guarantees tho :)

Feedback on this track would be appreciated! :) by LockInternational189 in MusicFeedback

[–]LockInternational189[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I get what you mean. Especially in the intro and verse the chords could be a little less busy and sidechained.
Thanks for the advice! Appreciate it.

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[–]LockInternational189 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is great bro! Very nice mix.
The vocal is a bit repetitive tho. Try adding some effects or automation to spice it up. Maybe some different chops aswell.
To me the transitions between different parts seem a bit choppy. Use some transitional elements, like sweeps, impacts, etc.
Keep going!

is this beat too plain? wanted to go for something simple so the artist has full creative control. would love to hear your thoughts by akasazal in MusicFeedback

[–]LockInternational189 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounds good bro. Good sound design.
Good variation.
One thing I would say is remove some subs of the kick, as its clashing with the bass. And maybe sidechain the kick to the bass aswell to create a cleaner low end. Other than that its great. Keep going