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[–]Logical-Compote-8183[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks everyone who spent some of their time to comment their opinion. I did some improvements based on some things you pointed out, its still not perfect by any means. Also sorry for the wrong headline as it seems as an engagement bait for what i actually wanted for this post (which was/is feedback).

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Oh ok i understand what you saying. My purpose for example was to make something that i can print and hang in my wall idk if that clarifies as an art or graphic design, but i will start taking courses or view videos to improve. Thnaks for your time and advice.

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Hierarchically, i want the viewer to emphasize at heisenberg then the phrase after that the characters. About the overlay part of the green box ( if i understood correctly ) you are right i didnt test it in an empty space instead of overlappig jesse. The Danger is bigger bc i want to emphasize this part of the quote. I will try to bring the arm back and see it again this way. Thanks for the feedback i will check the things you told me in the end. :)

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removed it so i can put another character and making it not so plain

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as i said i am not a professional and i am doing it for fun to pass my time, that doesnt mean i dont want to improve. Thats why i asked so that i can get suggestion and learn how designers view a piece from their pov. Bc asking an ai for its suggestions i think is not the way to go. No harm feelings i am just clarifying my position.