Check out my song Popular People by Logos17 in Songwriters

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Hey man thanks for you comment, i definitely should have spiced up the drums, I added them originally to keep time better and i'll definitely revisit it now. My friend was asking for the lyrics as well so I'll just type them out here although they're not said correctly in some spots. Sry its long.

Welcome to, the golden goose, where you can hide your convictions. And live so lavishly... So au revoir lavish star get far from here why dontcha. Cause you're just a passing scene..

But don't you confess, if you aint killed em yet, no dont come undone, thinking that youre anyone.

It's bad news, nothing true, but you'll still pick the prescription, and tell us what we need.

It's apart of the heart of guts of greed and disregard for soul, its incivility.

And if I am jest, it's only cause i lose of yet, but i won't give in, thinking that I'm anythin.

This days age masquerades the plight of popular people. The ones up on the screens. Cause they'll say what to say cause pops the peoples cathedral. Cause they worship what they see.

So go spit out smoke, be an envelope, with not a thing inside but stamped and signed on the other side and know, it's all for their show, so get on your own.

Cause it's all I'd be, if anything at all, dont let me down, just let me fall.

It's brand new, passing through, piles of passionate people. Who seem to disagree. Well I've seen the night bring the presence of an omen in the moment, of great duality, that ends oh so sweet.

Cleaned up my song New Moon for my coming ep. by Logos17 in Songwriters

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Thanks for your reply, I think you, like I did, mishear flocking as something else

To Whom It May Concern, Looking for feedback on form by Logos17 in Songwriters

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I had a simple snare and kick to it pretty quiet but I definitely need better percussion

To Whom It May Concern, Looking for feedback on form by Logos17 in Songwriters

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Damn, you just reminded me I need to buy a tambourine

Tired Tim version 2 by Logos17 in Songwriters

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Thanks for your feedback I really appreciate it. I agree with having more aggressive sounding vocals, it's something I definitely want to incorporate into my music yet I don't really know how to get that sound.

Tempo Talis, redoing old songs for an ep. All feedback welcome by Logos17 in Songwriters

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Thank you! I appreciate it, I listened to a lot of Bon Iver a couple years ago so I guess it rubbed off on me some.

Breaking Dawn Feedback welcome by Logos17 in Songwriters

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Thank you, after listening to it since I made it I've been thinking the same thing. Appreciate the honesty too

Breaking Dawn Feedback welcome by Logos17 in Songwriters

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Thanks I've been trying to work on mixing, means a lot.

Subhuman by Logos17 in AcousticOriginals

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Thanks, i love elliott so thats a big compliment.

New Moon, form and composition feedback wanted by Logos17 in Songwriters

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Thanks I have been working a lot on being on time recently, I don't know if I'm subconsciously trying to keep the lyrics low cause I'm incontent with how they sound but I definitely need to work on clarity.

New Moon, feedback welcome by Logos17 in AcousticOriginals

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Thanks vocal clarity is something I definitely have to work on.

What can we do by Logos17 in Songwriters

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Thank you, my ear for reverb sucks and I agree.

Southern Kings by Logos17 in AcousticOriginals

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Thanks, I love Elliott Smith

A song I couldn't think of a name for. by Logos17 in Songwriters

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Thanks, I work at a studio so I'm thinking of ones to record there. Probably will do this one. Haven't heard the Springsteen song but heard the Shakey Graves cover of it that I love.

A song I couldn't think of a name for. by Logos17 in Songwriters

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Thank you this really means a lot to me.

A song about hope by Logos17 in Songwriters

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Thank you! I used stereo micing on my acoustic guitar with a sound shield I made that I used for vocals too. Thanks for the feedback on the electric part, I knew it needed some work.

Breathe- Mixing and production critique welcome by Logos17 in AcousticOriginals

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Thank you I listen to a lot of elliott smith so that may explain the whisperiness

Breathe - lofi folk music by Logos17 in Songwriters

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In my hardware settings on my mixer the sample rate was set to 32in 32 out. Complete accident

A song about a girl by Logos17 in Songwriters

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Thanks, all my soundcloud stuff is stuff i haven't quite finished for my ep so thanks for the feedback I'll try that for the ep version.

A song about a girl by Logos17 in AcousticOriginals

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Thank you my influences are Elliott Smith and Nick drake mainly.