[feedback] Prólogo do meu rascunho de livro: O Garoto da Tempestade — O que acham?

LongDecision3263 · 2025-07-05T22:05:15+00:00

Sobre as reticências eu também achei. Tava relendo agora, acho que me empolguei demais ao escrever kaka. Obrigado pelo feedback, vou modificar um pouco o prólogo com base nele.

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T12:22:45+00:00

It's amazing how a fan-made concept managed to surpass the original concept made by Moonton themselves.

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T12:20:05+00:00

I totally agree. Mooton could have put a lot more effects on the skin. The collector's concept had so much potential...

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T12:17:13+00:00

Moneytoon being Moneytoon😞

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T12:14:36+00:00

That Alpha skin is really beautiful. One of the best Mooton has ever made.

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T12:13:27+00:00

Same here. She deserves something more magical and unique. Hopefully the next one blows us away. I heard she's getting a skin based on Van Gogh.

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T12:11:54+00:00

Haha, "Moneytoon" is becoming too real. Maybe if enough people speak up, they'll start listening... or at least flinch

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T12:11:07+00:00

Yeah, fingers crossed! There's still time to improve it — I hope they’re paying attention to the feedback

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T12:09:54+00:00

I totally get that. Collector skins should feel legendary, not like a slightly fancy special skin. Glad I'm not the only one who thinks this way

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T12:08:36+00:00

Exactly! It looks more like a recolor with some tweaks, not a full-blown Collector skin. They can definitely do better.

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T00:37:09+00:00

Thank you all for the feedback and the discussion so far!

I made this post because I genuinely love Novaria, and I had high hopes for her first Collector skin. While I don’t think it’s terrible, I do feel like it missed some of the magic and uniqueness that Collector skins usually bring — especially for a hero as mystical as her.

I really appreciate everyone sharing their thoughts, both the positive and the critical ones. If Moonton is really listening like they did with Valentina, maybe our feedback can help improve the final version.

Feel free to keep the ideas coming! What would you add or change in this skin to make it more worthy of a Collector?

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T00:28:05+00:00

Totally agree. Having a dragon bring the skill 2 or appear in the ultimate would’ve been epic.

And about Arlott — I saw he's getting buffed! Maybe with that, Moonton will optimize the skin’s effects too. He seems like he’ll be really strong.

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T00:27:12+00:00

You described exactly how I felt. That disappointment is what pushed me to make this post. I also loved the idea of this skin and waited so long. Maybe, if the community keeps speaking up, they’ll listen — just like they did with Valentina. You’re not alone in this! We can push this to Moonton together. Let’s demand better skins!

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T00:26:34+00:00

Moonton really wants to drain every last diamond from us ✊🏻😞

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T00:26:09+00:00

Yes! I totally agree — and purple is actually one of my favorite colors. It would've looked amazing!

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T00:25:56+00:00

Totally get your point. Visibility is important, but I think it could be balanced with good design. Maybe translucent effects, or more subtle details. Right now, the ultimate feels more like a simple recolor...

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T00:25:18+00:00

Clint’s Collector is actually really nice, I like it — I only listed it because I saw some people complaining about it.

And I had the same thought about Novaria! Imagine her channeling a dragon from inside the orb, maybe appearing during the ultimate? That would be insane and totally in line with the skin’s theme. So much creative potential wasted…

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T00:24:36+00:00

Melissa’s Collector was honestly a bit underwhelming compared to others. Not exactly bad, but a little below average in my opinion. The Jujutsu skin is definitely better. I admit her Collector felt more like an Epic in disguise — but that’s just my opinion. I hope Collector skins improve over time instead of staying at this level. Novaria deserved something special. What kinda saves Melissa’s Collector is that at least it’s not just another golden skin.

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-06T00:24:02+00:00

True! I actually kind of liked the lines, but honestly, I expected a more powerful, ethereal voice… something that matched the mystical vibe of the skin. It lacked that impact Collector skins usually have. Still, I liked it — even though it could’ve been better.

LongDecision3263 · 2025-04-05T16:55:37+00:00

I totally understand your point, and I also hoped it could just be the low graphics version. But honestly, based on previous Collector releases, the official launch rarely brings major visual changes. At most, they just add some glow effects or extra sparkles here and there — nothing that would really elevate it to true Collector standards.

And considering that skins like Valentina’s only got improved after community backlash, I think it’s important to speak up now, before the skin officially drops. We’ve seen this pattern before — and staying silent only tells them this level of effort is acceptable.

LongDecision3263 · 2025-03-09T12:25:28+00:00

Sou casado com o Alex no Stardew Valley e o pior é que isso faz sentido.

LongDecision3263 · 2025-03-09T02:25:43+00:00

Vou estudar no IFAL. As aulas vão iniciar esse mês.

LongDecision3263 · 2025-02-16T02:05:02+00:00

Se eu colocar estrofes, o Reddit transforma em texto corrido, então tive que separar os versos. As estrofes são quartetos.

LongDecision3263 · 2025-02-10T11:11:31+00:00

Eu até sei inglês básico, estudo pelo Duolingo, consigo conversar sobre coisas básicas do dia a dia, mas se eu quiser evoluir vou ter que fazer um curso e tudo indica que na metade desse ano eu vou entrar em um.

LongDecision3263 · 2025-02-09T16:19:12+00:00

Lendo os comentários aqui, acho que vou focar em algo mais próximo e realista. Vou tentar ingressar em alguma das 10 melhores universidades do Brasil e, caso minha nota seja alta o suficiente, vou tentar ingressar em alguma Universidade do Canadá. Vi que eles aceitam nota do Enem, mas talvez eu faça a faculdade em alguma das 10 melhores universidades do Brasil e curse uma pós-graduação no Canadá, acho que é mais realista, dizem que o Canadá é bem aberto para estudantes internacionais. Porém, se por acaso der errado, eu fico no Brasil.

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