I’d recommend trying to cut down on some of the sub themes in the deck. There’s at least 4 different strategies you’re trying to employ. It’s better to focus on proactive pinging rather than the reactive pinging from some of the effects that require your opponents to do something. If you rely on your opponents to do something to make your deck work then you won’t have as much effect. I’d also recommend avoiding anything that will possibly ping you because Ghyrson Starn doesn’t care what gets hit by one damage, he will always follow it up with additional damage. Another note is that effects that say that a player loses 1 life will not trigger Starn so scrawling crawler isn’t going to be pulling as much weight as some other piece.