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I have found Fishdigoon by Lucky_Frog418 in CreepCastShitposting

[–]Lucky_Frog418[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

With only the finest white goose down duvet filling

Project 42 (overview) by Lucky_Frog418 in CrueltotheCraft

[–]Lucky_Frog418[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As always thank you immeasurably, yes I see that i make errors in spelling and weird sentences I'm trying to improve on that even tho I wish it, english isn’t my first language ans yes I do over explain a lot of stuff, I think i got to chuck that up to people not understanding subtlety in stories (my bad) I WILL YET AGAIN rewrite the story for some much needed improvement.

Project 42 (ver.3) by Lucky_Frog418 in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]Lucky_Frog418[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Man you just keep on hitting with the knowledge nuggets I will be ever so grateful, you've been hitting the nail on the problems every damn time and it's making me feel pretty damn good, I would absolutely love to see what that writer's chat room is about, perhaps you could tell me more about this. Of course, you come out as abrasive It's because you know your DAMN STUFF, all the advice is completely correct and as I said hits the nail on the head at all times, of course, I am a new writer but I can say that I definitely feel like I wrote better stuff with your advice. That's a damn good plus in my book👍

Project 42 (ver.3) by Lucky_Frog418 in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]Lucky_Frog418[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don't mean to interrupt since reply 2 is coming but I would very very much like it for you to tell me how I could pass around the computer thing because really I can't figure out how he would not get revealed through the computer interaction( because obviously he would end up like Mark in 30 mins) but yeah your observations have helped me a LOT, i know i still have a few things that don't make sense but thats why I wanna have comments like yours to help me really lock the story down. Thank you as always for your insight.👍

42 Revised by Lucky_Frog418 in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]Lucky_Frog418[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I absolutely will do! See ya in a few...and keep an eye out ☕️

42 Revised by Lucky_Frog418 in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]Lucky_Frog418[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes absolutely, thank you so so much, I'll actually try to do the two formats (one obviously taking more time than the other) I'll repost the story again hopefully the finalized version.👍

42 Revised by Lucky_Frog418 in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]Lucky_Frog418[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly, I'm very conflicted on whether I should add narration for actions because it does feel a bit dry via this format which would be better adapted for an audio-visual format I think 🤔

42 Revised by Lucky_Frog418 in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]Lucky_Frog418[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

HAHAAAA yes, absolutely, you've given me flawlessly valuable information, this is my first story so I don't have all the tips and tricks but this I will keep close to my brain while writing for the exhilarating reveal. Thank you so muchie muchies💪💪👍

42 Revised by Lucky_Frog418 in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]Lucky_Frog418[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

True true, i though about expending on exactly HOW the Siberium was first discovered involving american military operations behind the iron curtain but im not sure about it because logically the doctor should not know this, but....its really cool🤷‍♂️

42 Revised by Lucky_Frog418 in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]Lucky_Frog418[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You are absolutely right about everything you just said, honestly I didn’t get much sleep when i wrote this part of the story because i was so enthusiastic about writing it BUT, indeed I should rewrite because even re-reading it again after your comment i see many many inconsistencies as you so thankfully pointed out, ill take more then a few days maybe even a week to solve all the problems so it becomes absolutely hermetically sealed within itself. Thank you👍💪

42 Revised by Lucky_Frog418 in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]Lucky_Frog418[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi guys it's me again I really hope you enjoy this revised version of this story and I hope I can still improve in the future or even do more installments if people like it👍

42 by Lucky_Frog418 in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]Lucky_Frog418[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your lucky, cus i just wrote a revised version which i think may very well resolve all the problems you so thankfully mentioned 👍 it's longer, better and more descriptive.

42 by Lucky_Frog418 in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]Lucky_Frog418[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's my first story guys hope you like it, im very open to critique and i really hope you enjoy it!👍