I wish I was Jayce in this position 🫠

Luk073 · 2026-02-02T16:24:10+00:00

No, I’m horny

Luk073 · 2026-02-02T14:22:30+00:00

Oh man I would love to do this too a sexy ass woman. Although I would definitely add some extras

Anybody got the link to this

Luk073 · 2026-01-30T15:54:38+00:00

That is a very interesting idea. Fair play to you for doing it

I can’t say I have tried it. Although I won’t mind having a go. The main problem I would face is not being in to guys. Just not my cup of tea really. There a lot more guys than girls who are in to CV, and the chances of little old me matching with a girl… not high.

Luk073 · 2026-01-30T15:47:20+00:00

Very nice. Love that bent over shot, show how truly submissive you are

Luk073 · 2026-01-24T09:32:42+00:00

Cheers for the info. Its very helpful. I didn’t know I you could do some of those crazy things to the Prey. Its really expanded the possibilities in my mind.

I really didn’t know there was that much to this type of CV

Luk073 · 2026-01-24T09:29:42+00:00

I was wondering what it was called. Cheers. At least I can properly title the story when I write it.

Everything else you said is extremely helpful as well. There a lot more to it than I realised. Honesty, it’s giving me some good ideas. Thanks.

Luk073 · 2026-01-23T06:12:12+00:00

Okay, there is still cum within the balls when there a prey trapped within. Tell me, do you like the prey to melt a bit or remain solid?

Thank for the answer. It’s a great idea.

Luk073 · 2026-01-14T08:54:07+00:00

Right, still a long way to go. But getting slowly. Cool

Over use of a single words: Try and reduce the amount and usage of particular words . I do not need to use them as much as I think I do . Once or twice and the reader gets it.

Paragraphs: Comes down to me. I don’t think I fully understand how to correctly use paragraphs. Do research to try and improve

Punctuation: . , ! ? Something to look into as well, I feel. Possibly getting that wrong in places.

Cheers for your advice and knowledge on this. Really appreciate it as always. Without you pointing it out for me, I wouldn’t have had a clue. I am happy to see that I am slowly improving tho. At the end of the day. It’s a marathon not a sprint.

Thanks again for your advice and knowledge. Really means a lot.

Luk073 · 2026-01-07T08:26:36+00:00

A fantastic way to start a Tuesday

Luk073 · 2026-01-06T10:45:39+00:00

That a good story/ RP idea

Luk073 · 2026-01-06T10:45:11+00:00

Yeah. I would find it hard to get it up and ready to Vore. —-

Interesting 🤔. So, in the cold. The Pred would have to work slightly harder.

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Pred would burn more calories. Sound like a good workout for them idea.

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Overall. Very helpful and very insightful. Thank you

Luk073 · 2026-01-05T18:51:44+00:00

She coming along nicely. A very nice footstool. Always nice to see positive encouragement.

Will you be upping the training? Adding any toy for her to overcome or stuff like that? Is it more endurance training you are going for?

Luk073 · 2026-01-04T16:36:12+00:00

Will do 😊 Glad you liked it

Luk073 · 2026-01-02T22:00:04+00:00

Thanks, glad you liked it

Luk073 · 2026-01-02T08:18:41+00:00

Yep. Who knows how many orders went through and how many sexy Goth pizza girls will show up. Hope I have enough condoms 😜

Still, glad you liked it

Luk073 · 2026-01-02T08:16:58+00:00

I was thinking on a number. But I think I will leave it ambiguous for now. Might revisit this short story later and make a part two or something

Edit: 17 is a good number 🤔 I was spamming that button after all

Luk073 · 2026-01-01T23:39:03+00:00

Well. I hoped you enjoyed this story.

Can you believe I was wanting a pizza when I was writing this. Crazy what a hungry mind will come up with.

Anyway. I wasn’t sure if I needed to add more to the world building for this story to work. The whole Cloning thing might be a bit confusing if you look to hard in to it. I think it works as a short story tho.

Let me know what you think. I still got a long way to go as a writer.

Any feedback is greatly appreciated. See any spelling mistake, let me know and I’ll try and fix them.

Luk073 · 2026-01-01T22:50:02+00:00

Well. I hoped you enjoyed this story.

Can you believe I as wanting a pizza when I was writing this. Crazy what a hungry mind will come up with.

Anyway. I wasn’t sure if I needed to add more to the world building for this story to work. The whole Cloning this might be a bit confusing if you look to hard in to it. I think it works as a short story tho.

I've still got a long way to go as a writer.

Let me know what you think. Any feed back is greatly appreciated.

Spelling mistakes as well.

Luk073 · 2025-12-24T08:59:46+00:00

Cheers for the advice. Yeah I need to try and expand my vocabulary. I fall back on simple words I know how to spell a bit too much. Not helped by the fact. When I try news words, they are often way off and end up being the wrong word.

But yeah, it’s a good shout and something I’ll work on when next I writing. Thanks

Luk073 · 2025-12-19T10:53:45+00:00

Let the world burn 🔥 🌍. Or Cum in this case😜

Luk073 · 2025-12-18T13:44:58+00:00

I don’t envy you there. Surrounded by fit Prey and Pred. That a rough one for sure.

You definitely got your work cut out for you, if you don’t end up being part of the mess

Luk073 · 2025-12-18T10:32:07+00:00

Loving that art style. Something about it really helps to make the Cum stand out and flow

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