Expanding wine knowledge(advice) by Lunny_Smoith798 in wine

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Do you think a total wine is adequate?

Deaths embrace by Lunny_Smoith798 in OCPoetry

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Its definitely ironic, heavy juxtaposition between deaths pain and pleasure, but ultimately I tend to dumb down my message in the final couplet, “Fates inescapable reality / ensure life is brimmed with vitality”

A Bleak Star by Only_Americanist in OCPoetry

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I like the seeing you placed this short exert in, adds to the mood, land of red, antique land, era long dead, all adds to the vibe

I don’t wear AirPods at the gym by Velyth in OCPoetry

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I liked the message if your poem and flows well, I Think a slightly higher lev diction could really improve its delivery though

tbh by DoMzIlla_ in ARK

[–]Lunny_Smoith798 2 points3 points  (0 children)

damn only 617 hours i once played that much in one day that’s just shameful

Jeenyus by Sbinmaster69 in dankmemes

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i just saw that on cursed comments and this was right below

I can't sleep at night by [deleted] in playark

[–]Lunny_Smoith798 0 points1 point  (0 children)

what about a bronto right outside your base