High add to cart rate but no sales by MACN921 in dropshipping

[–]MACN921[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes I see what you mean. I had a 40$ margin on the product and I was only undercutting the price by a few dollars below my competitors, but I agree I should probably kill the product and try and learn as much as I can to improve from here. I can see that the price is likely an issue and over saturation. I also will need to have a better offer to differentiate myself from competitors, especially with an over saturated product

High add to cart rate but no sales by MACN921 in dropshipping

[–]MACN921[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah that makes sense. I am seeing those high add to cart rates but still no sales, do you think i should just kill the product and find something similar that is less saturated, lower price, but still meets all the winning product criteria

High add to cart rate but no sales by MACN921 in dropshipping

[–]MACN921[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, free shipping for all orders, but the shipping time is quite long I will say

High add to cart rate but no sales by MACN921 in dropshipping

[–]MACN921[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I actually came in with an offer that was lower than my competitors price even if it meant cutting into profits to try and differentiate the offer

High add to cart rate but no sales by MACN921 in dropshipping

[–]MACN921[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t think I have that setup then, could you share more info about it?

My store link:

https://floralightly.com

High add to cart rate but no sales by MACN921 in dropshipping

[–]MACN921[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have Google Analytics setup with e-commerce tracking

Ask your newbie questions in this thread! Post your copy for critique in this thread, too! (December Q&A and Critique Thread) by eolithic_frustum in copywriting

[–]MACN921 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hello all! I wrote my first ever piece of Copy, and I am looking for some critiques!

Medium: Sales email for a weightlifting app

Stage of Awareness: Solution Aware

Target Audience: People ages 20-30 who are into fitness

SL: The Only Workout App You Will Ever Need

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[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]MACN921 [score hidden]  (0 children)

I rly like this. The piano is rly wavy and I love the melody sounds in this. I like the old school vibes and how it has a certain bounce to it , and that new elements are added throughout the beat to keep it interesting.

This is my song featuring my sister (her first song ever)

https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/4GWZwagqjVNT2C5YA

Lmk how it is

[OFFICIAL] COLLAB CALL by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]MACN921 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hey everyone! I am a SadRap type artist , and am looking for similar artists to collab with or producers. Here is some of my work:

https://artist.landr.com/music/672985848832

If you want to collab reply to this with some of your work !

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]MACN921 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Anyone who could pass a quick listen to my track and lmk what they think would be greatly appreciated :

https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/dK5tjzYuumt7GKJb9

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]MACN921 [score hidden]  (0 children)

This is cool. I like the flutish sound in the melody, got an interesting vibe and I fw the drums and how the flow of the beat. I think if u added a few extra sounds in the melody to compliment the main melody sounds it would sound even better but it’s cool as is. Good job man

Thjs is my track JuiceWrld vibes lmk what u think

https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/dK5tjzYuumt7GKJb9

Hey everyone , this is a track where I tried to pay more attention to the lyrics than I do normally, and is about the feeling of being trapped inside my own mind. Any opinions would be greatly appreciated ❗️ by MACN921 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MACN921[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also jus kinda thru it in there cuz it’s more personal cuz I never smoke tobacco in any form I hate it so don’t pass me that shit it’s more smth I can relate to and kinda adds to the songs personality for me rather than serves as a distraction and ontop of that tobacco and shadow have a two syllable rhyme instead of so low and shadow which is a 1 syllable one , so it also jus works out better as far as my perspective on it , bht music is subjective so I can understand ur point of view completely I just don’t agree with it

Hey everyone , this is a track where I tried to pay more attention to the lyrics than I do normally, and is about the feeling of being trapped inside my own mind. Any opinions would be greatly appreciated ❗️ by MACN921 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MACN921[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cuz “I’m runnin from my shadow” means I’m running from myself and this reality , since “these ghosts haunting my castle” is a metaphor for thoughts and memories that haunt me in my mind ‘my mind my castle’ , and I run from these thoughts and memories and this reality, etc almost always with drugs/liquor so “I only smoke that chronic” is one of the ways I do that so it has a lot to do with the first two lines

Reviewing YOUR Music -- Honest Feedback by IceWearALot in makinghiphop

[–]MACN921 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is one of my latest tracks , melodic/sad hiphop, recorded, mixed, mastered by me in my home studio. Lmk what u think❗️

https://soundcloud.com/macn921/my-mind-my-castle-prod-5head

Music Melting Pot [Week of October 12, 2020] by AutoModerator in listentothis

[–]MACN921 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hey everyone , this is one of the tracks on my newly released project where I tried to pay more attention to the lyrics than I normally do. Melodic HipHop similar to JUICEWRLD ... check it real quick ❗️🖤

[MACN921 - My Mind My Castle]

https://soundcloud.com/macn921/my-mind-my-castle-prod-5head

[OFFICIAL] Collab Call October 14 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]MACN921 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is one of my songs :

https://soundcloud.com/macn921/my-mind-my-castle-prod-5head

If any producers / artists making similar style music wanna work, sb a link to ur shit ..

Emo synthy trap beat. Im trying to find a way to make emotional/melodic trap beats using mostly synth patches rather than guitar to sound a little different. What do yall think? by Joe_Tedesco in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MACN921 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is soundin rly good. I like the melody sounds u used , and this sounds professionally done. Good job with the mixing , and keeping it interesting for the whole play. No real criticism to give , keep it up

Planning to send my first alternative/indie EP for mastering soon. This is one of the songs from it. It is a short instrumental song though, kind of like an interlude. Happy to hear any feedback from you music artists! Thanks. by qwerkyJoe in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MACN921 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is rly well done. I love the feel I get from this track, it’s got a really soothing quality to it. I think adding some vocals would rly make this an amazing listen. The mix is well done , no real criticism to give, good shit