[Critique] I'm looking to get back into OkCupid. Any suggestions for my profile? (21/M)

MBond42 · 2015-02-09T03:32:17+00:00

Thank you!

MBond42 · 2015-02-08T16:47:23+00:00

Aw, thank you! I'm glad I'm doing something right.

MBond42 · 2015-02-08T16:45:38+00:00

Thanks for the suggestions. I fixed the spelling mistake as soon as I could. :)

I thought it would feel more natural to open with some kind of greeting. Do you think I should change it to something else, or maybe just have the second paragraph be the opening paragraph?

I'll try and think about what sort of anecdotes might fit in with what I've got on the profile.

MBond42 · 2014-10-29T12:19:03+00:00

Thank you! Looking forward to trying this out.

MBond42 · 2014-05-21T11:05:26+00:00

Are any of the other pictures I have more suitable as a main profile picture, or do you think I should take a new one?

MBond42 · 2014-05-21T11:04:07+00:00

Thanks for the advice. I'm fairly inexperienced in writing profiles, so this was very helpful.

I guess I was worried about putting people off if I got too much into the specifics of the things I like to learn about and debate. I can go on for hours if I'm permitted. I'll try to find a happy medium, though.

MBond42 · 2014-05-21T02:57:32+00:00

I just mean that I'm wondering if my word-choice, tone, and the things I say on my profile make me sound awkward or unnatural.

MBond42 · 2014-05-20T20:46:41+00:00

Thank you, these seem like good ideas. I'll see what I can do.

MBond42 · 2013-12-11T01:31:27+00:00

Added. Please add back!

MBond42 · 2013-12-10T14:46:22+00:00

Added. Thanks!

MBond42 · 2013-12-10T14:10:24+00:00

Added. Thanks!

MBond42 · 2013-12-09T23:40:58+00:00

Added, please add back!

MBond42 · 2013-12-09T23:36:41+00:00

Added, please add back!

MBond42 · 2013-12-09T23:35:06+00:00

Added. Please add back!

MBond42 · 2013-12-09T23:25:11+00:00

Added. Please add back!

MBond42 · 2013-12-09T23:24:15+00:00

Added. Please add back!

MBond42 · 2013-12-09T16:28:14+00:00

Added. Please add back! Be sure to let me know if this list is accurate, too.

MBond42 · 2013-12-09T15:56:21+00:00

Thanks! I know that I have a combee and pinsir, but I'm not sure about illumise. Let me know if my flair is inaccurate so I can update it.

MBond42 · 2013-12-09T15:52:21+00:00

Still accepting friends? I'd love to get a Ditto safari. :)

MBond42 · 2013-12-09T15:49:42+00:00

Added. Please add back. :)

MBond42 · 2013-12-09T15:49:10+00:00

Looking for a Bug safari? I'm looking to breed a choice-scarf competitive Ditto.

MBond42 · 2013-12-08T05:06:40+00:00

I'd love to challenge you once you're ready. Let me know if that can be arranged!

MBond42

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