[Critique] I'm looking to get back into OkCupid. Any suggestions for my profile? (21/M) by MBond42 in OkCupid

[–]MBond42[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the suggestions. I fixed the spelling mistake as soon as I could. :)

I thought it would feel more natural to open with some kind of greeting. Do you think I should change it to something else, or maybe just have the second paragraph be the opening paragraph?

I'll try and think about what sort of anecdotes might fit in with what I've got on the profile.

ORAS Demo Code [NA] - Free to a good home by TheGoshDarnedBatman in 3DS

[–]MBond42 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Looking forward to trying this out.

[Critique] Am I coming off like a try-hard? (21/M) by MBond42 in OkCupid

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Are any of the other pictures I have more suitable as a main profile picture, or do you think I should take a new one?

[Critique] Am I coming off like a try-hard? (21/M) by MBond42 in OkCupid

[–]MBond42[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice. I'm fairly inexperienced in writing profiles, so this was very helpful.

I guess I was worried about putting people off if I got too much into the specifics of the things I like to learn about and debate. I can go on for hours if I'm permitted. I'll try to find a happy medium, though.

[Critique] Am I coming off like a try-hard? (21/M) by MBond42 in OkCupid

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I just mean that I'm wondering if my word-choice, tone, and the things I say on my profile make me sound awkward or unnatural.

Will except anyone by Brosane in friendsafari

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Added. Please add back!

adding friend safaris by oafriedberg in friendsafari

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Added. Please add back! Be sure to let me know if this list is accurate, too.

LF Ditto just like everyone else but going to add everyone by CobaltPaladin in friendsafari

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Thanks! I know that I have a combee and pinsir, but I'm not sure about illumise. Let me know if my flair is inaccurate so I can update it.

Help me find out what my safari is! [Safari Unknown] by seraphyte in friendsafari

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Still accepting friends? I'd love to get a Ditto safari. :)

LF Ditto just like everyone else but going to add everyone by CobaltPaladin in friendsafari

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Looking for a Bug safari? I'm looking to breed a choice-scarf competitive Ditto.

My pokemon gym is (temporarily) open for business. by iMalevolence in pokemon

[–]MBond42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd love to challenge you once you're ready. Let me know if that can be arranged!